Sunday, September 10, 2006

a lonely sunset


 


sitting here
on the rock of ages
watching the dreams of my life
pass on before me
visions of things
I wanted
and never got
Seeing you and I
at peace
Like a violent thunderstorm
it seems
that's about to ebb
and I sit
alone
afraid
and cold
Please don't go
I find no use in begging
the fate I cannot see
that you are going so far
away from me
Looking upwards
lost in greys
and blues
as you ascend
to a glory that I shall soon know
and I sit
alone
afraid
and cold
Please, don't go
Feeling none of your pain
as I attempt
to separate from you
from the first time
since I knew you
I can't
and they don't understand
because I won't reveal
but yet
it hurts
deeply still
and I sit
alone
afraid
and cold


Please don't go


Please...
don't
go

12 comments:

  1. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I AM JUST ALL SO WARM INSIDE...dont worry i aint going nowhere....

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  2. Thanks Honey...

    Verbal...Im so touched! By your being warmed..and not leaving...
    what would I do without your own brand of 'diction'

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  3. hmmmmmmmmmmm...your words are like a valentine love in the fall gurl and you can git all the diction you need....

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  4. Beuatiful joyce

    separation from something you have known is almost like losing yourself

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  5. Rick...Keep on....LOL (thanks)


    Enchanting....thanks, Lady. This is kinda personal....and it's about loss too...

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  6. hmmmmmmmmm.....yes joyce imma keep on til some one can make me stop....lol

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  7. LOL..I cant do anything with you...wrong equipment. But if you had a........and we could do some thangzzz. Isee you tried to pique me with that challenge,but I passed, right?

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  8. deeply emotional, and dramatic.....really great write!

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  9. Sassy...Imglad you liked. It came from deep within...

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  10. yeah you passed wit flying tasty orgasmic colors....like ribbons i da sky girl....

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