Monday, September 18, 2006

(BEYOND THE NAKED EYE) A SP Exeercise....

A SP Exercize...10 Words magnify


*Maneuver,*Opaque,*Nostalgic,*Dangerous,Absent,*Yearn,*Balance,*Lament,
Unique,*Excuse,*Stimulation



 



Removing the opaque blinders
taking a long deserved
nostalgic look
into your curious side
I find myself looking
for the things in side of you
that you try to hide


What is it
that makes you tick inside
I replay it over and over
in my mind
seems like a maneuver
of crooked plots
and devious wills
or a vision for the blind
too complex to refill
Your desires, I have dissected
Seems funny that you craved me
more than twice
but, not really wanting to fill the cup
you refused to risk the sacrifice


Do you sip for stimulation's sake
or is there some point
that you with dangerous yearning intent
have often tried to make
Others see
what I can only wish I saw
long before you excited me
They see you balancing unique excuses
on the tip of your tongue
Claiming victories
You couldn't have possibly won
Tell them you never won my heart
it was never the truth
The excuses you make now
are your only weakened proof
Scoffing at your resolve
weaving in and out of trouble
lamenting some unique escape...
in the absence of the perfect character
you just try too hard to fake


My eyes doth clearly see
the blinders gone away
I intend to know from here on out
the rules of the oldest game
that crooks of good intentions


...attempt to play


 


 

9 comments:

  1. damn Joyceeeeeeeeee....sounds your alarm just went off sweetie..........nice poetic slice of awakening.

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  2. Joyce it sounds like you have found somebody out. Great poem sis...had me wishing they would quit the facade and tell the truth too.

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  3. The truth will be revealed...so they can either come with it or get exposed...

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  4. Jay...thanks...and my alarm had been off, and I refused to hear..

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  5. Javelle...Life affords us the chance, in court to meet our accusers...and in my court---you will meet mine..I promise to expose all

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  6. well got dayum! This was powerful and I loved the flow of this..well said..

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  7. "J" you tell 'em....put 'em on front street........a powerful piece indeed.....

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