'Running
into the dusky horizon,
chasing the sun'
before night falls
I intend to have some fun
I've worked all day
All my life
As a matter of fact
Now it's time
to get back on track
The things I lost
along the way
took a whole lot
out of me
My future
looks so clear
as far as I can see
Only a few clouds
on the horizon
But,
what would life be
If I didn't always have something
testing
me
depressing
me
stressing
me
to bring out
the best in me'
The trials bring out our true character
ReplyDeletewhat a beautiful use of the one line, and an excellent piture interp
ReplyDeleteSharon your interpretation of the pic is wonderful, but your interpretation of life is even better. I enjoyed reading this poem.
ReplyDeleteJA...loving it...way to be hopeful and anxious for LIFE!
ReplyDeleteMzLady...so ture...TY for stoppin by
ReplyDeleteSassy...I really do like the challenges, and Thanks
ReplyDeleteLocumdown...Ty I have so much hope...
ReplyDeleteJavelle.....I know SHarons poem must be good, you called me her. Now I have to go look at hers...LMAOOOOO
It's ok..I know it's a senior moment
Yes, you always spin hope into the mix - I love reading your poetry and posts because you have that spark. Peace
ReplyDeleteWow you always have a great concept when doing a line or a pic ... Your talent is apprecaited !!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful
Tammy...Im liking that bear more and more....LOL
ReplyDeleteI'mmoved that you find my work pleasant...and full of hope..that's my aim....Thanks for commenting
Enchanting..You cant talk..Youre the same. We are surrounded by talent, and Im not too big to say I like a piece.....Its called respect
ReplyDeleteThanks Bae
I am so ashamed and sorry that I got my sisters mixed up. LMAO...I do this offline with my sisters Terebia and Dede...they just laugh at me. Anyway I think this is a great poem.
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