Monday, January 30, 2012

"Untitled"......A Wordfix@56 Write #16 (Sorry)








Love keeps looking at me
...like it knows me...
It seems familiar,
but I've only heard of it....
It makes me wish that it would sit up here
and talk to me
I know it only wishes to stroke me right out of my dress
.....
with finesse
 and, under duress...
leave me in a disheveled mess



8 comments:

  1. .lovely piece..subtle and succinct..
    all emotions in one go..:)

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  2. I like this... very fitting for the photo!

    BTW...this is WFA56 #16....LOL

    thanks for joining this week!

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  3. oops oops oops!!! I don't see the requested links Joyce

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  4. lady, all I can say is I lost it cause I was looking at both pics...and that's my story um sticking to...lol

    thanks for the read...and it's always a pleasure to do the challenges...they ground me

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  5. I LOVE how this flows. It's easy, light, a gentle caress. But at the same time there's an undertone of a need to be ravished. GREAT writing!

    http://bostonsdandd.multiply.com/journal/item/459

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