
Love keeps looking at me
...like it knows me...
It seems familiar,
but I've only heard of it....
It makes me wish that it would sit up here
and talk to me
I know it only wishes to stroke me right out of my dress
.....
with finesse
and, under duress...
leave me in a disheveled mess
...like it knows me...
It seems familiar,
but I've only heard of it....
It makes me wish that it would sit up here
and talk to me
I know it only wishes to stroke me right out of my dress
.....
with finesse
and, under duress...
leave me in a disheveled mess

.lovely piece..subtle and succinct..
ReplyDeleteall emotions in one go..:)
I like this... very fitting for the photo!
ReplyDeleteBTW...this is WFA56 #16....LOL
thanks for joining this week!
oops oops oops!!! I don't see the requested links Joyce
ReplyDeleteI am so sorry for the mix up. This is a link to the challenge page:
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This is a link to the Rules page, as to how to post....
http://wfa56.multiply.com/journal/item/2/PLEASE_READ
thanks lady!
ReplyDeletelady, all I can say is I lost it cause I was looking at both pics...and that's my story um sticking to...lol
ReplyDeletethanks for the read...and it's always a pleasure to do the challenges...they ground me
don't beat me...pwweeeeeeeezze lol
ReplyDeleteI LOVE how this flows. It's easy, light, a gentle caress. But at the same time there's an undertone of a need to be ravished. GREAT writing!
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