Sunday, January 15, 2012

Sheltered Walk......A WordFix@56 Write #14















Pages of time tossed to and fro

like too big shoes
Sinking slowly into the gray of night
searching for some good news
at the end of the day
Finding dawn
walking out of muted whispers
in the dark of loneliness

The founder of the wind....God of peace
shelter me

from the places I been

12 comments:

  1. Well done my friend!
    "The founder of the wind....God of peace
    shelter me
    from the places I been"

    Beautiful! :)

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  2. There is a hush in the air...Peace! Can you feel it? All me want is peace...I like this...Well done my firend. My compliments

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  3. Yes...I can hear it....

    thanks for feeling this one just as I write it...

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  4. Smiling...thanks for feeling this...

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  5. Thank you Tom....thanks for taking the time to read me....

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  6. Sorry, but I had to chuckle when I read "Found of the wind" while looking at old tennis shoes hanging in a tree. As long as the wind is blowing away from you, that would be OK!!!

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  7. With that said, the lyrical feel to this poem is very beautiful.

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  8. Just wondering where you see 'found of the wind'...I see founder of the wind, and that is God...but nevertheless I thank you for taking the time to feel the write...

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  9. I too, love the last three lines....splendid work, Joyce!!
    thanks for joining in WFA56 this week

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  10. lady, I'm glad you liked the part I think sticks out the most, and is most inspiring...

    thanks for the read, lady!

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