Thursday, November 9, 2006

Picture Interpretation....Come Closer




Seduce her


In 35 lines, or less


Show me what you got!

32 comments:

  1. Beautiful Joyceeeeeeeeee........loved the manner of expression. A true love poem if I ever read one.









    *counting.....1,2,3,4,5, etc..... Thanks for the opportunity.

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  2. Come closer

    "come close to me baby
    Let my love hold you
    I know this world is crazy
    What is it without you"
    Today isn't just another day
    let's create something beautiful
    I can picture you, feedin yourself to me
    on one big platter of commitment
    and unbridled ecstacy
    Hoping that you bring alive in me
    everything we could be...together
    Lust will never be an excuse for my passion
    even if it is a bit old fashioned
    nevertheless, the fire
    and the desire for you
    burns in me
    Your heart and mind baby-- follow it
    that smile on your face--happiness
    you could model it
    Im going to do the best I can
    Cause I'm the best I can be
    when I'm with you
    Words, like time are now frozen
    within your eyes
    I can only see you in me
    Come closer, let me look inside
    Truth is I can't hide from you
    you can see right through me
    I light a scented candle
    in a fragrance that lures you
    writing a tight beat
    against the summer's heat
    that pulls you next to me
    and if you come closer

    you can help me to discover me

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  3. Loved your interpretation......here is what I saw in the same picture.....


    recognition of your flesh and its singular use for me
    refusing awareness of your souls necessities
    lay back and receive what I imagine you crave
    allow me to drag your flesh to a place
    that does not require your hearts attendance
    nor your souls remembrance
    purposeful distance to keep your emotions at bay
    that “Jane Doe” ecstasy when we lay

    say not my name nor hear yours spoken
    these carnal acts are our only tokens
    receipts of our sinful connection
    removal of affection
    a full serving of lust minus the trivial adages of love, commitment or trust

    I offer the only thing you truly desire
    that inextinguishable fire that burns rampant
    between thighs so damp that
    your natural instinct is to beg me to swim
    dive into our mutual sin
    yet never to begin…..love.

    You do not need love or nor commitment
    so none will ever be suggested
    no explanation requested…

    There is no emotion intended for you
    only anonymous passion and heat
    and the promise that should we ever meet
    in the light of day……
    Without remorse or a second thought we will both look the other way

    Knowing full well that we have nothing to tell
    our actions have no substance……. no meaning
    neither uplifting nor demeaning

    Do not listen to those that would promise you love’s eternity
    simply come…….. lay next to me
    bring your flesh and nothing else of loves design
    For I only offer you…….what you seek so hard to find
    I intend to serve your inner-whore…..and nothing more.

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  4. Loved the interpretation.......here is what I saw in the pic....


    recognition of your flesh and its singular use for me
    refusing awareness of your souls necessities
    lay back and receive what I imagine you crave
    allow me to drag your flesh to a place
    that does not require your hearts attendance
    nor your souls remembrance
    purposeful distance to keep your emotions at bay
    that “Jane Doe” ecstasy when we lay

    say not my name nor hear yours spoken
    these carnal acts are our only tokens
    receipts of our sinful connection
    removal of affection
    a full serving of lust minus the trivial adages of love, commitment or trust

    I offer the only thing you truly desire
    that unexstinguishable fire that burns rampant
    between thighs so damp that
    your natural instinct is to beg me to swim
    dive into our mutual sin
    yet never to begin…..love.

    You do not need love or nor commitment
    so none will ever be suggested
    no explanation requested…

    There is no emotion intended for you
    only anonymous passion and heat
    and the promise that should we ever meet
    in the light of day……
    Without remorse or a second thought we will both look the other way

    Knowing full well that we have nothing to tell
    our actions have no substance……. no meaning
    neither uplifting nor demeaning

    Do not listen to those that would promise you love’s eternity
    simply come…….. lay next to me
    bring your flesh and nothing else of loves design
    For I only offer you…….what you seek so hard to find
    I intend to serve your inner-whore…..and nothing more.

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  5. 35 lines. Yall both know I'm long winded. Ok, I will return. I shall do my best.

    JA...sweet, soft and flowing. Love it, my dear.
    JB...mistress of scribe. Love it.

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  6. JB, Never call a woman Jane Doe when you wanna get wit her...LOL

    She won't want you...She wants love..


    Thanks for the pic. She is very tempting....and for tryna get my woman...LOL

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  7. Honey..I know you long winded, but take your best shot....She already look like she wants me...Heheheheh

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  8. Wanton with desire
    Caught between heaven and hell
    My tongue playing tricks on your soul
    Begging and encouraging you to respond
    Can I plant a seed
    Within your valley
    Birthing me…
    Us and
    We
    Let me
    Love you
    Perfectly
    Caught in rapture
    Sexy seductress
    My ethereal need
    Supernaturally divine
    Can I whisper in you ear
    Drive you to ecstasy
    Strum you…
    Play your notes precise and carefully
    My eros
    Trap me
    Bottle me
    I want to be whatever you want me to be
    I want to caress your being
    Totally
    Loving you eternally
    Not even death can consume us
    We love in sections
    And degrees
    Spontaneous combustion
    Erotic erosion
    Baby…come to me
    Let me love you
    In and out…thoroughly

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  9. Baby, make up your own mind
    Surely you can see
    that what I offer to thee
    is much more than a roll in the hay
    my love will sustain us
    until my dying day
    Promises,
    promises neither of them can keep
    They will run out on you
    when you're in bed fast asleep
    One calling you Jane
    The other wanting to strum you
    like yesterday's cookie dough
    Don't play with a heart
    I always say
    A woman's heart was made
    to be honored til her dying day

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  10. Trust me Joyceeeeeeeeeeee...I think I know this broad....she don't wanna be loved...she don't even wanna hear all that sh&#!!!!!!

    She tryna get done right......in bed, Jane Doe suits her perfectly...

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  11. Hot Kelly....but you know that already huh?

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  12. "rolling my eyes at you," JB.....LOL......

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  13. you just mad cause you wrote a love poem for a hooker....LMAO

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  14. just kiddin' Joyceeeee....don't go postal over the chic in the pic.

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  15. SHE AINT NEVA GONNA LEAVE DAT CORNER!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  16. But you could make her leave--make an honest woman out of her...LMAOOOOOOOO

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  17. naaaaaawwwwwwwwwww....never that one babes.....

    she alright where she at.....

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  18. laughing....Damn, end of the road for her, huh

    She ws only good for one thing...LOL

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  19. damn you 3 are incouragable amn those were great pieces

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  20. enchanting...Thanks. We were Kinda feeling a lil incourageable, too. LOL

    Just something to do...You can add to it, if you like

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  21. Candles light
    Curtains drawn
    Let me come and lay with you baby
    Let my body keep you warm
    Let me slip off your dress
    And let my soft kisses
    Cover you with share bliss
    Do you think I could please you?
    Would you allow me to tease you?
    To warp you up
    In wanton pleasure
    To her you scream in sweet surrender
    Let me show you
    How I feel
    Let me entice you
    With a feeling that’s real
    Lay back baby
    I will be your guide
    As I take you on a fantasy ride
    A journey beyond heaven’s walls
    Bringing you to liquid heat
    As you begin to fall
    Fall in like
    Fall in want
    fall for me
    As I rightfully taunt
    Your body till it explodes in ecstasy
    Lay there and allow yourself
    To become open just for me…

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  22. Dang, Baby, you got some friess to go with that shake.....LOL

    Heyyy Enchanting, you tryna take her, aren't you...

    That was very good..

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  23. steal her was never in my thought ja but i do seduce as powerful as i write

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  24. EnchantingTreasure.........And, don't think I don't know it....

    That's why we gotta step up our game...LOL

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  25. YEH fo'reals.....ish HOTT IN HURR!!....

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  26. Raven...We meant to warm things up. I was looking for you to play, but instead, and as usual...you're off playing with the other girls..."Humph"

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  27. Xpressions....I'm glad you stopped by. Hope you enjoyed the read....We were kinda feeling a lil "creative"...LOL

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