"come close to me baby Let my love hold you I know this world is crazy What is it without you" Today isn't just another day let's create something beautiful I can picture you, feedin yourself to me on one big platter of commitment and unbridled ecstacy Hoping that you bring alive in me everything we could be...together Lust will never be an excuse for my passion even if it is a bit old fashioned nevertheless, the fire and the desire for you burns in me Your heart and mind baby-- follow it that smile on your face--happiness you could model it Im going to do the best I can Cause I'm the best I can be when I'm with you Words, like time are now frozen within your eyes I can only see you in me Come closer, let me look inside Truth is I can't hide from you you can see right through me I light a scented candle in a fragrance that lures you writing a tight beat against the summer's heat that pulls you next to me and if you come closer
Loved your interpretation......here is what I saw in the same picture.....
recognition of your flesh and its singular use for me refusing awareness of your souls necessities lay back and receive what I imagine you crave allow me to drag your flesh to a place that does not require your hearts attendance nor your souls remembrance purposeful distance to keep your emotions at bay that “Jane Doe” ecstasy when we lay
say not my name nor hear yours spoken these carnal acts are our only tokens receipts of our sinful connection removal of affection a full serving of lust minus the trivial adages of love, commitment or trust
I offer the only thing you truly desire that inextinguishable fire that burns rampant between thighs so damp that your natural instinct is to beg me to swim dive into our mutual sin yet never to begin…..love.
You do not need love or nor commitment so none will ever be suggested no explanation requested…
There is no emotion intended for you only anonymous passion and heat and the promise that should we ever meet in the light of day…… Without remorse or a second thought we will both look the other way
Knowing full well that we have nothing to tell our actions have no substance……. no meaning neither uplifting nor demeaning
Do not listen to those that would promise you love’s eternity simply come…….. lay next to me bring your flesh and nothing else of loves design For I only offer you…….what you seek so hard to find I intend to serve your inner-whore…..and nothing more.
Loved the interpretation.......here is what I saw in the pic....
recognition of your flesh and its singular use for me refusing awareness of your souls necessities lay back and receive what I imagine you crave allow me to drag your flesh to a place that does not require your hearts attendance nor your souls remembrance purposeful distance to keep your emotions at bay that “Jane Doe” ecstasy when we lay
say not my name nor hear yours spoken these carnal acts are our only tokens receipts of our sinful connection removal of affection a full serving of lust minus the trivial adages of love, commitment or trust
I offer the only thing you truly desire that unexstinguishable fire that burns rampant between thighs so damp that your natural instinct is to beg me to swim dive into our mutual sin yet never to begin…..love.
You do not need love or nor commitment so none will ever be suggested no explanation requested…
There is no emotion intended for you only anonymous passion and heat and the promise that should we ever meet in the light of day…… Without remorse or a second thought we will both look the other way
Knowing full well that we have nothing to tell our actions have no substance……. no meaning neither uplifting nor demeaning
Do not listen to those that would promise you love’s eternity simply come…….. lay next to me bring your flesh and nothing else of loves design For I only offer you…….what you seek so hard to find I intend to serve your inner-whore…..and nothing more.
Wanton with desire Caught between heaven and hell My tongue playing tricks on your soul Begging and encouraging you to respond Can I plant a seed Within your valley Birthing me… Us and We Let me Love you Perfectly Caught in rapture Sexy seductress My ethereal need Supernaturally divine Can I whisper in you ear Drive you to ecstasy Strum you… Play your notes precise and carefully My eros Trap me Bottle me I want to be whatever you want me to be I want to caress your being Totally Loving you eternally Not even death can consume us We love in sections And degrees Spontaneous combustion Erotic erosion Baby…come to me Let me love you In and out…thoroughly
Baby, make up your own mind Surely you can see that what I offer to thee is much more than a roll in the hay my love will sustain us until my dying day Promises, promises neither of them can keep They will run out on you when you're in bed fast asleep One calling you Jane The other wanting to strum you like yesterday's cookie dough Don't play with a heart I always say A woman's heart was made to be honored til her dying day
Candles light Curtains drawn Let me come and lay with you baby Let my body keep you warm Let me slip off your dress And let my soft kisses Cover you with share bliss Do you think I could please you? Would you allow me to tease you? To warp you up In wanton pleasure To her you scream in sweet surrender Let me show you How I feel Let me entice you With a feeling that’s real Lay back baby I will be your guide As I take you on a fantasy ride A journey beyond heaven’s walls Bringing you to liquid heat As you begin to fall Fall in like Fall in want fall for me As I rightfully taunt Your body till it explodes in ecstasy Lay there and allow yourself To become open just for me…
I am a true Aquarian, as I call myself, loving all that can't be seen, but felt, as we are the water bearers of the world. We love deep, make friends to keep, and live each day as if it were the tomorrow we've been looking for....
Beautiful Joyceeeeeeeeee........loved the manner of expression. A true love poem if I ever read one.
ReplyDelete*counting.....1,2,3,4,5, etc..... Thanks for the opportunity.
Come closer
ReplyDelete"come close to me baby
Let my love hold you
I know this world is crazy
What is it without you"
Today isn't just another day
let's create something beautiful
I can picture you, feedin yourself to me
on one big platter of commitment
and unbridled ecstacy
Hoping that you bring alive in me
everything we could be...together
Lust will never be an excuse for my passion
even if it is a bit old fashioned
nevertheless, the fire
and the desire for you
burns in me
Your heart and mind baby-- follow it
that smile on your face--happiness
you could model it
Im going to do the best I can
Cause I'm the best I can be
when I'm with you
Words, like time are now frozen
within your eyes
I can only see you in me
Come closer, let me look inside
Truth is I can't hide from you
you can see right through me
I light a scented candle
in a fragrance that lures you
writing a tight beat
against the summer's heat
that pulls you next to me
and if you come closer
you can help me to discover me
Loved your interpretation......here is what I saw in the same picture.....
ReplyDeleterecognition of your flesh and its singular use for me
refusing awareness of your souls necessities
lay back and receive what I imagine you crave
allow me to drag your flesh to a place
that does not require your hearts attendance
nor your souls remembrance
purposeful distance to keep your emotions at bay
that “Jane Doe” ecstasy when we lay
say not my name nor hear yours spoken
these carnal acts are our only tokens
receipts of our sinful connection
removal of affection
a full serving of lust minus the trivial adages of love, commitment or trust
I offer the only thing you truly desire
that inextinguishable fire that burns rampant
between thighs so damp that
your natural instinct is to beg me to swim
dive into our mutual sin
yet never to begin…..love.
You do not need love or nor commitment
so none will ever be suggested
no explanation requested…
There is no emotion intended for you
only anonymous passion and heat
and the promise that should we ever meet
in the light of day……
Without remorse or a second thought we will both look the other way
Knowing full well that we have nothing to tell
our actions have no substance……. no meaning
neither uplifting nor demeaning
Do not listen to those that would promise you love’s eternity
simply come…….. lay next to me
bring your flesh and nothing else of loves design
For I only offer you…….what you seek so hard to find
I intend to serve your inner-whore…..and nothing more.
Loved the interpretation.......here is what I saw in the pic....
ReplyDeleterecognition of your flesh and its singular use for me
refusing awareness of your souls necessities
lay back and receive what I imagine you crave
allow me to drag your flesh to a place
that does not require your hearts attendance
nor your souls remembrance
purposeful distance to keep your emotions at bay
that “Jane Doe” ecstasy when we lay
say not my name nor hear yours spoken
these carnal acts are our only tokens
receipts of our sinful connection
removal of affection
a full serving of lust minus the trivial adages of love, commitment or trust
I offer the only thing you truly desire
that unexstinguishable fire that burns rampant
between thighs so damp that
your natural instinct is to beg me to swim
dive into our mutual sin
yet never to begin…..love.
You do not need love or nor commitment
so none will ever be suggested
no explanation requested…
There is no emotion intended for you
only anonymous passion and heat
and the promise that should we ever meet
in the light of day……
Without remorse or a second thought we will both look the other way
Knowing full well that we have nothing to tell
our actions have no substance……. no meaning
neither uplifting nor demeaning
Do not listen to those that would promise you love’s eternity
simply come…….. lay next to me
bring your flesh and nothing else of loves design
For I only offer you…….what you seek so hard to find
I intend to serve your inner-whore…..and nothing more.
35 lines. Yall both know I'm long winded. Ok, I will return. I shall do my best.
ReplyDeleteJA...sweet, soft and flowing. Love it, my dear.
JB...mistress of scribe. Love it.
JB, Never call a woman Jane Doe when you wanna get wit her...LOL
ReplyDeleteShe won't want you...She wants love..
Thanks for the pic. She is very tempting....and for tryna get my woman...LOL
Honey..I know you long winded, but take your best shot....She already look like she wants me...Heheheheh
ReplyDeleteWanton with desire
ReplyDeleteCaught between heaven and hell
My tongue playing tricks on your soul
Begging and encouraging you to respond
Can I plant a seed
Within your valley
Birthing me…
Us and
We
Let me
Love you
Perfectly
Caught in rapture
Sexy seductress
My ethereal need
Supernaturally divine
Can I whisper in you ear
Drive you to ecstasy
Strum you…
Play your notes precise and carefully
My eros
Trap me
Bottle me
I want to be whatever you want me to be
I want to caress your being
Totally
Loving you eternally
Not even death can consume us
We love in sections
And degrees
Spontaneous combustion
Erotic erosion
Baby…come to me
Let me love you
In and out…thoroughly
Baby, make up your own mind
ReplyDeleteSurely you can see
that what I offer to thee
is much more than a roll in the hay
my love will sustain us
until my dying day
Promises,
promises neither of them can keep
They will run out on you
when you're in bed fast asleep
One calling you Jane
The other wanting to strum you
like yesterday's cookie dough
Don't play with a heart
I always say
A woman's heart was made
to be honored til her dying day
Trust me Joyceeeeeeeeeeee...I think I know this broad....she don't wanna be loved...she don't even wanna hear all that sh&#!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteShe tryna get done right......in bed, Jane Doe suits her perfectly...
Hot Kelly....but you know that already huh?
ReplyDelete"rolling my eyes at you," JB.....LOL......
ReplyDeleteyou just mad cause you wrote a love poem for a hooker....LMAO
ReplyDeletejust kiddin' Joyceeeee....don't go postal over the chic in the pic.
ReplyDeleteCRACKING UPPPPPPPPPP
ReplyDeleteSILLY WOMAN
ReplyDeleteSHE AINT NEVA GONNA LEAVE DAT CORNER!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteBut you could make her leave--make an honest woman out of her...LMAOOOOOOOO
ReplyDeleteGive her your name, and your keys
ReplyDeletenaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww....never that one babes.....
ReplyDeleteshe alright where she at.....
laughing....Damn, end of the road for her, huh
ReplyDeleteShe ws only good for one thing...LOL
damn you 3 are incouragable amn those were great pieces
ReplyDeleteenchanting...Thanks. We were Kinda feeling a lil incourageable, too. LOL
ReplyDeleteJust something to do...You can add to it, if you like
oh i will joyce dont doubt it...
ReplyDeleteCandles light
ReplyDeleteCurtains drawn
Let me come and lay with you baby
Let my body keep you warm
Let me slip off your dress
And let my soft kisses
Cover you with share bliss
Do you think I could please you?
Would you allow me to tease you?
To warp you up
In wanton pleasure
To her you scream in sweet surrender
Let me show you
How I feel
Let me entice you
With a feeling that’s real
Lay back baby
I will be your guide
As I take you on a fantasy ride
A journey beyond heaven’s walls
Bringing you to liquid heat
As you begin to fall
Fall in like
Fall in want
fall for me
As I rightfully taunt
Your body till it explodes in ecstasy
Lay there and allow yourself
To become open just for me…
Dang, Baby, you got some friess to go with that shake.....LOL
ReplyDeleteHeyyy Enchanting, you tryna take her, aren't you...
That was very good..
steal her was never in my thought ja but i do seduce as powerful as i write
ReplyDeleteEnchantingTreasure.........And, don't think I don't know it....
ReplyDeleteThat's why we gotta step up our game...LOL
YA'LL GOT IT BURNIN UP IN HERE!!!!
ReplyDeleteYEH fo'reals.....ish HOTT IN HURR!!....
ReplyDeleteRaven...We meant to warm things up. I was looking for you to play, but instead, and as usual...you're off playing with the other girls..."Humph"
ReplyDeleteXpressions....I'm glad you stopped by. Hope you enjoyed the read....We were kinda feeling a lil "creative"...LOL
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