
Excuse me....
If you don't mind(mind, mind, mind!!)
can you help me(come here, will you)find
the zipper(ripping clothes off) that closes me up?
Inside this silence is a really big show(party party) going on
(remember the last time?) don't lose your concentration
I must win(whenever you want)
I'm ready...
jak(7/15/12)

Cool double speak, Joyce! What is said masking what is unsaid! :)
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteKae...believe it or not, I be riding and I can see two or three conversations going on in my mind and I just wanted to try one. I kinda like it...
ReplyDeletethanks for the picture that inspired it...that red blindfold kinda had a voice of its own :)
Castaway...thank you much much :)
ReplyDeleteThat was very good
ReplyDeleteIt's an unusual way to see the picture. A blindfold that spoke of silence. It's interesting.
ReplyDeleteyup, so ready.... leaves the interpretation wide open.... Wolfie Likey
ReplyDeleteI need a fan to cool off! LOL
ReplyDeleteNicely done...Lovely image...
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeleteSometimes its a good thing our words are censored and sometimes it isn't. I wonder which applies here?
Interesting write.
thank you tabby!
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yep, like two voices anyways being blinded...and how the mind splits....
ReplyDeletethanks for the read, anchemio :)
giggling,, you right...it does, wolfie ..lol nodding affirmatively..lol
ReplyDeletethank you lady lady...glad you liked it...:)
ReplyDeleteyou got a good point, Ms A.G....our words sometimes should be covered cause they could get get us in lots of trouble...lol it's just amazing how the thoughts split thoughts, and sometimes more than once...lol
ReplyDeletethanks for the read....