Sunday, July 15, 2012

Subliminally











Excuse me....
If you don't mind(mind, mind, mind!!)

can you help me(come here, will you)find
the zipper(ripping clothes off) that closes me up?
Inside this silence is a really big show(party party) going on
(remember the last time?) don't lose your concentration
I must win(whenever you want)

I'm ready...








jak(7/15/12)

15 comments:

  1. Cool double speak, Joyce! What is said masking what is unsaid! :)

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  2. Kae...believe it or not, I be riding and I can see two or three conversations going on in my mind and I just wanted to try one. I kinda like it...

    thanks for the picture that inspired it...that red blindfold kinda had a voice of its own :)

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  3. Castaway...thank you much much :)

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  4. It's an unusual way to see the picture. A blindfold that spoke of silence. It's interesting.

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  5. yup, so ready.... leaves the interpretation wide open.... Wolfie Likey

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  6. :)

    Sometimes its a good thing our words are censored and sometimes it isn't. I wonder which applies here?

    Interesting write.

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  7. yep, like two voices anyways being blinded...and how the mind splits....

    thanks for the read, anchemio :)

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  8. giggling,, you right...it does, wolfie ..lol nodding affirmatively..lol

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  9. thank you lady lady...glad you liked it...:)

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  10. you got a good point, Ms A.G....our words sometimes should be covered cause they could get get us in lots of trouble...lol it's just amazing how the thoughts split thoughts, and sometimes more than once...lol

    thanks for the read....

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