Running you
through dream after dream
You always got somewhere else to go
......just tiring me out......
out of control in a good way
Whatever it takes to stop me from losing it
This hunger
making me make a fool of myself
crying, lying....dying inside
trying to pretend
I can drink....
when I can't
*chuckles* Can't get rid of the lover with liquid forgetfulness, eh?
ReplyDeleteNaahhh it never works....chasing people through dreams. This is an actual repeating dream where the same thing happens and there is always an excuse to not be present...smh lol
ReplyDeleteThanks for such a purging picture to be mused by...
You're very welcome, love! Morning! :)
ReplyDeleteAnd a 'easy like Sunday morning to you, too'....
ReplyDeleteoh..now I.m right out of breath !,,an exhausting dream...
ReplyDeleteI'd say...nicely done..HUGZS
ReplyDeleteOur dreams can be haunting when we let them. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteThat says it so well.
ReplyDeleteLovely arranged poem; the part I quoted reminded me of my character's problem...
ReplyDeleteYours is cleverly written, mine simple prose.
http://redpenn.multiply.com/journal/item/394/FIAF_70-_dangling_over_the_edge
'out of control in a good way'...lol
ReplyDeleteOh yeah it was...and frustrating too, but it's me working my life out, I guess...lol
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading me, lady...
I'd say, thank you, and glad you liked it...:)
ReplyDeleteYes they can. This is only one of the haunting repeat dreams I have. There must be a message in them, but I can't get it right so I just keep repeating them...lol
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read!
thanks lady!!!
ReplyDeleteYeah I threw that in there cause it used to be my problem...lol ANd I thank you for reading and liking....
ReplyDeleteon my way to yours...
yeah, I think the running all the time, the serial dreams, the constant struggling, and the exhaustion at the end, by whatever means necessary is in a good way, considering how one can handle it oh so wrong....
ReplyDeleteEither way, thank you for reading me...