Monday, November 7, 2011

Crossroads of Time....a Word Fix@56 #4 Write





Time brags a vexation over us
that's merely a bend
We've reached crossroads that so many times before said
this is the end

 Now....instead of being happy for our freedom
and accepting our wish for our well
you openly cite your displeasure

So now, time, you take your diadem over us

and go to Hell







jakuper (11/7/11)

6 comments:

  1. well now...I guess you told 'em! lol

    Ya know I saw many potential ways to go with this photo....anorexia/bullemia....prostitution.....spousal abuse....sexual abuse......modeling. Agreed,.... most unsavory but to not address the 'ugly' doesn't prevent it from happening. Thanks for participating this week !

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  2. ah..made me smile..such a defensive.spout of words..
    ,,but some people dont need an excuse..for an argument..?

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  3. Well dayum....ok i deserved that....i so glad i can read u....

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  4. Lady, I saw alot of ways also, but I looked at her youth, and it just rolled off my mental with how time, twisted, plays with young people's minds

    Thanks for feeling me...

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  5. you right Caroline...time tends to speed up and take away what's most precious and that is our youth...our life...

    thanks for liking this spill to what little youth I have left lol.....

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  6. I'm as glad, Lori..because we can still grow together, in grace....and peace....and what little youth we got left...

    Thanks for feeling me...

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