Monday, November 28, 2011

Minus Refrain...........A Kae's FIAF Write #64












"Love travels faster than the speed of light!  
When you love and think of someone,
you are there with them no matter where they are"






feeling foreign to light
sinking me into it
 the roof minus ceiling
the mind....running
from north to south
east to west
esteeming  fastidiously
minus refrain
minus rest








6 comments:

  1. This is oddly unsettling to me, Joyce! It's almost like I can hear the clash of the lights against the jangle of the words on my nerve endings!

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  2. Words, Kae..they stick around much longer than they're intended to at times. These....I hear..I heard....and I still hear.....

    Thanks for the read...

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  3. Yes ma'am, Caroline....even mornings feel like night at times...lol

    thanks for feeling these words.....

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  4. She was there no matter why....I liked this twist...it can be a two way trip.

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  5. thanks so much, ferioliv.....such is the character of some women....

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