Wednesday, March 2, 2011

DIZZY LOVE








Ever in creasing circles of possibility
as possibility forms an attraction
Attraction explodes
haphazardly into passion,
.....sometimes unseen...sometimes not revealed
yet the deal is sealed
in the heart

Passion calls upon daydreaming....
daydreaming about love
Young love becomes love....becomes love..becomes....love
as love becomes frantic
and demanding
and confusing
and.....estranged
and too much and too little...and too late

(Love gives me a headache)
until it gets to be
ostensible
Ostensible becomes dizzying
dizzying becomes intolerance....surrounded by doubt
and as doubt grows
so goes the idea of a more perfect union
Loves ass shows
even behind closed doors
and the mournful optimist becomes
the pimped meridian pessimist

Pessimism that begets discontentment
Discontent leaks resentment.
Resentment becomes agitation,
agitation coupled with
frustration and aggravation
and then....

the knife.........twists.......in your back

Before long...
love is nothing more
than a hindsight...
a bitter fight
with no winner
because love had no fight in her

Ever decreasing circles of
who's wrong
who's right

I get dizzy on fair rides
so please get me off this crazy thang, Jane!
The rational divide in my mind
is tangled..like twisted string
......help me.....Help me...

......
the pain is
neverending
 
the pain is
neverending
 
the pain is neverending
 
 
 
 
 
I'm think I'm going insane











jakuper

10 comments:

  1. uh oh :P

    *insert bold type here* INSANE?

    wow..

    thats ok though..insane is the new crazy.

    errr...i mean the new sane... :)

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  2. Good Lawd Lady!!! THIS is INTENSE...Whew!

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  3. Frances, funny thing was this poem actually made me dizzy thinking of how love can sometimes take you there....

    Thanks for reading me

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  4. Caroline...love does that at times, and without apology lol Thank you for feeling it

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  5. Aint that the truth, Ms T lol

    Thanks for reading...

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  6. Yes it was Spicey. i've not had alot of love in my life, but the love I had...took me to valleys and mountaintops...so I had some of all of it...lol

    thanks for feeling me...

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