Saturday, February 19, 2011

Think Again...FIAF #24




I kept asking myself was I sure this was how I wanted malevolence.  She trusted my lifestyle, and that he was uninjurious with me.  

We had help though.  Seductive music....humidity....me being unusually concupiscent....his excrescence....and her vacationing alone, again. 

This the last time he'll flirt with me, thinking it's an abatement...










jakuper (2/19/11)

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  1. Virginia ~February 19, 2011 at 12:38 PM

    English, please.

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  2. joyce cooperFebruary 19, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    a wordsmith saying English please...lol lol lol

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  3. joyce cooperFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:02 PM

    I kept asking myself was I sure this was how I wanted revenge. She trusted my lifestyle, and that he was harmless with me.

    We had help though. Seductive music....humidity....me being unusually horny....his bulge....and her vacationing alone, again.

    This the last time he'll flirt with me, thinking it's a joke ...

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  4. joyce cooperFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:03 PM

    I kept asking myself was I sure this was how I wanted revenge. She trusted my lifestyle, and that he was harmless with me.

    We had help though. Seductive music....humidity....me being unusually horny....his bulge....and her vacationing alone, again.

    This the last time he'll flirt with me, thinking it's a joke ...

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  5. Carissa RFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    was this a ménage à trois?

    lol

    nice to pull that outta that pic.

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  6. Mary PatriciaFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    I am lost for words here!
    http://neuron66.multiply.com/journal/item/77/fiction_in_a_flash_24.The_Book

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  7. joyce cooperFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:52 PM

    lol Not exactly. It was a scene in my head that is fictitious for me, but probably has happened between two female ex-lovers, when one gets a boyfriend and leaves her with him thinking he is safe, while in ole girl's mind she is thinking more of revenge than anything...lol

    thanks for reading

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  8. joyce cooperFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:53 PM

    Ok, neuron lol Thanks for stopping by to check it out...

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  9. Frances ~~~~~~February 19, 2011 at 9:01 PM

    Original as always Joyce :)

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  10. Crystal DreamerFebruary 19, 2011 at 9:16 PM

    another unique thought on it. seems I haven't read one yet of a sweet lady just sitting on the porchswing in the sunshine.
    Mine is a bit like yours perhaps, but nothing about revenge, and less vocabulary.
    http://crystalinne.multiply.com/journal/item/1440/fiction_in_a_flash_24_porch-swing_proposal

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  11. joyce cooperFebruary 20, 2011 at 3:39 AM

    Thanks Frances, I was just keeping it in the line of fiction. lol

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  12. joyce cooperFebruary 20, 2011 at 3:40 AM

    crystinne, thank you for stopping by to read. it's so usual to think in terms of love or the happily ever after, but I like stretching my pen to places few dare to go...

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  13. Kae BFebruary 20, 2011 at 6:36 AM

    Interesting...and dark, Joyce. Well written!

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  14. SkyeRider .February 20, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    Good twist!

    http://skyerider.multiply.com/journal/item/410/Fiction_in_a_Flash_24

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  15. Mythical MagpieFebruary 20, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    I'm glad you explained a bit in the thread above, I was a bit confused before.

    I liked it though. It made me think and I do like that :)

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  16. joyce cooperFebruary 20, 2011 at 4:53 PM

    Thank you Bonny! it's been a while that I've been mused by the pictures..and this one looked good and could go so many ways....

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  17. joyce cooperFebruary 20, 2011 at 4:53 PM

    thank you skyrider!!

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  18. joyce cooperFebruary 20, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    thanks mythical....I like to think outside the box...lol

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