
Surrounded by black young men
with black tee shirts
and black headbands,
she walked up to the black casket
and placed one black rose onto the black lapel
of the black suit of her black son
Gone was his childhood
free of worry over material needs
His adult life was filled with charcoal deeds
false friends with murky thoughts
and advice that money
couldn't have possibly bought
His new family is now bearing black roses
holding back black tears
that black dealings had bought
down through the years
His end--
bullets piercing a black hole
into his hardened soul
long before he lived
long before he would get old
How long did his sinister deeds
not regard the pain
seen inside his mother's eyes
and her fruitless cries
to the Lord she would nightly bleed
His eyes.....dreary as midnight
with a hate for a society
that could turn wine back into water
turn sun-shiny days
into starless, sooty nights
He tried to place her in that coffin
worrying about him
fervently praying for him every night
wishing he could escape this fateful plight
Why was his soul so cold and unfeeling
Did he care that while she was kneeling
his deeds pricked at her like pins and needles
Onyx bruises that would never be healing
He had succumbed to the pitch-dark of his sable sins
which seemed to have no end
Did he have no remorse?
Did it bother him that the blood
the drippings of his life,
that was no more...
was hers, too
as it escaped from him
smeared forever across her heart's floor
His love for her was hidden
behind evil choices
behind sweetened telephone voices
saying he was okay
but a life of crime
is the reason she is seeing him
for the last time today
No more crouching in dark shadows
doing dark things in the black of dingy rooms
No more picking his own funeral flowers
picking beautiful roses
black roses....
that should never have to bloom
jakuper(2/22/07)

Wow...that was powerful....loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks, Perfect! I'm honored you liked it...
ReplyDeleteJoyce you done outdone yoself! LOL This piece is AmaZiNG!
ReplyDeleteTY Poetic...This picture inspired this....along with trying to understand why young men travel in gangs, when the end is always the same...
ReplyDeleteso sad. I've seen this first hand and it is so incredibly sad. You captured it well.
ReplyDeleteMythtree/Tammy....It has to be a horrible feeling.
ReplyDeleteThanks for feeling it...
wow. I really felt this. I love the way you used the word black and carried it throughout the piece. Good scribe poet!
ReplyDeleteMs Byrd....It pleases me that you can feel me...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read...