Pink rose petals
falling
falling
I know you
Sweetest heart
I know you still love me...
I know sometimes you speak to me
in 'us' tones
and the truth of the matter is...
I STILL LOVE YOU
or I wouldn't
keep coming back
your love for her
couldn't last
because it was too easy
to walk away from
you loved her..but you weren't in love...
u had to love her, though
because thats so
in your nature
You don't make decisions
without some sort of love
you can build upon
We were both laughing
when you told me
"...you have this "cool" beg about yourself"
begging...
without really begging
You could always hear that desire
whenever you heard my voice
and I knew it
And if love is enough
why can't it
always
be enough?
Why cant I just want you to be happy
Why can't we just be friends
I know you know me
You took the time
to feel me out
all I got to remember
is this rose
can it be enough?
feel the soft petals
falling upon your silky skin
grazing against it
reminding me
again
and again...
she loves me
she loves me not
she loves me
and I love her tooo
because
I KNOW
in my heart...
another WOMAN
will never come close
to touching me....
that way!
and to think that...
you
NEVER
"touched"
me...
Yet
wow!
ReplyDeletethat's some kinda love JA
Jazzy Joyce. Your thoughts had a sweet flow from begining to end
ReplyDeleteLoc...Thanks...Just thinking, though...It sounded good in my head...
ReplyDeleteThree...Thanks for the read...
ReplyDeleteI'm just mentally flowing..and dreaming...
This had a light airy feel to it...sort of like luft balloons...loved it from beginning to dreamy end...
ReplyDeleteAfro...It was meant to be light...just a reminder that feelings still exist...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read, Lady! Glad u enjoyed
she loves me
ReplyDeleteshe loves me not
she loves me
and I love her tooo
because
I KNOW
in my heart...
another WOMAN
will never come close
to touching me....
that way!
and to think that...
you
NEVER
"touched"
me...
Yet
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How transitory is the nature of love...how lovely is this poem
I know this feeling...almost exactly as you have so eloquently scribed it...it is like butterflies...soft...feeling yet almost untouchable....scattered yet safe...and still...quite beautiful to vision take flight....LOVED IT...
ReplyDeleteloc sent me here.... although i'm not sure why...however, this is a good read... nice job!
ReplyDeleteASW...the first part is a part of a smiley saying on the Messenger....I borrowed it....Please don't tell...SHHHHH
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read. It's very much like I think about love, though...
Xpressions...Thank you! This is certainly a "beautiful vision" with beautiful thoughts...
ReplyDeleteRaven...maybe it's that she liked the poem....because it ws a nice collection of thoughts..and visions...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read...