Wednesday, November 1, 2006

Through Falling Raindrops


Thinking...
through falling raindrops
beating against foggy window panes
I stretch my thoughts to see
what's really going on
between you and I
remembering
that last embrace
how I traced your loving smile
with fingers
against your pretty face
I remember the first time
I said I love you
and how you knew
that I meant what I said
The first touch
that sent my rockets
to the moon
even when we parted
all too soon
I have to tell you
so much that I remember
that makes all the difference now
So much I need you to know
about me
about what I want
about all the things I learned
since you have been gone
I'm remembering all those kisses
that we placed
on each other's lips
and other places
The trips we took
in each other's eyes
the lows
the highs
Highs, you kept me on
the excitement
not knowing what to expect next
but whatever it was
it was well thought out
because you knew me
You took the time to know
my wants
my needs
my moods
my tendencies
Each a challenge for you
instead of a bother
I'm falling
nostalgically
back into yesterday
like random raindrops
with no course
falling
falling
without remorse
Because it was smooth sailing
It was new to both of us
We knew what we wanted
knew how to find it
and it was good
so damn good
Everything we shared
just like the rain
falling
falling
falling
falling



 

9 comments:

  1. beautiful portrayal...loved it Joyce!!!

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  2. GIVE ME A TISSUE....BLOW.........WONK, WONK.....
    SO BEAUTIFUL!!!! I FEEL MY TEARS FALLING...HOW DOES SOMETHING THAT FEELS SO GOOD END SO SOON?
    I THINK WE FELT THE SAME WAY BUT GAVE A DIFFERENT IMAGE OF YESTERDAY....BUT THERE ARE SOME QUESTIONABLE THINGS, I NEED NOT MENTION....LOL

    CAN I POST MINE...?

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  3. Deesia D....Glad you liked my joint...LOL smiling..

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  4. Nena...BY ALL MEANS..YOU CAN POST....

    THANK YOU FOR YOUR APPRECIATION OF MY WRITING...YOU ALWAYS KNOW HOW TO MAKE ME SMILE

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  5. hONEY ....THANKING YOU, SINCERELY....

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