Friday, November 10, 2006

Raven's Fridays' Challenge....

"Come here!  You have eluded me long enough.  It is now time for you to perform your wifely duties.  To hold you captive, against your will, is not my wish for your future here.  I have brought you underground, so that you may live out your days, with me.  Here, among those just like you."  Shaking with fear at the commanding tone in which she speaks, I rise slowly, and walk towards her.  She is so much larger than the rest of us, making me wonder if she, indeed is a woman.  "You doubt me?  Simply because of my appearance.  I assure you, I am just as potent as any male you have ever experienced, in your lifetime.  Yet, I will not force myself upon you, even if you do belong to me.  I can read your thoughts.  I know your emotional limits.  There is nothing you feel that I'm not aware of, as long as you are in my world.  But, once you leave this world, you will be free.  And privy to the consequences of normal living.  You belong to me,now.  Get used to it."

'But, why me?  What could you possibly want with me?  Surely you could find women more worthy than I, to surrender to you, to worship.  Why do you covet my simplicity?  I am afraid of you.    If I surrender to you, what kind of life will I be succumbing to?  Where are the rest of the women?  It's cold here, and dark.  Is it night all the time here?'   "Guards, bring me the most recent slave.  The one who continues to defy me; refusing to give me what I want.  Asking too many questions, just as this one is.  So this one can see, that I am not to be toyed with."   I watched, as two burly men disappeared into a door to the right, marked only with a D on the door.  'What is D for?'   "You really don't want to know."  I'm standing before her, still afraid, but I know she isn't playing.  I can feel it.  I also feel her reading my thoughts.  Knowing I am questioning how I got here, and what went wrong; how did I get picked for this life. 


I was just sitting at the bar, drinking.  Thinking.  This nice looking young lady walked up to me, and said good evening.  I said HI.  We talked, laughed, and shared a few drinks at a table in a corner, by the end of the bar.  I remember when I got up to go to the bathroom, I felt very drunk.  She said she would escort me to the car.  She wanted to drive me home.  I resisted, calling her every unholy name in the book.  I was always told, never let a stranger take you home.  I remember arguing, and then......I woke up, here.


The guards came back, and brought this thin, dirty, and smelly woman, and placed her beside me.  She looked up at me, from her weakened stance, aided by the men, and said, " If you do surrender, you will regret it"  And she passed out.  They dragged her back to the where she came from.  "Don't ask anymore questions!"  I knew not to think, because she would know what I was thinking.....  My thoughts now, became my fight to survive, over my choices.  What could she have meant by I would regret it.  There's only one way to find out.  Surrender.  "Alright, you win.  I surrender.  Let's get this over with.  What do I have to do?   Sleep with you?  That should be easy enough.  Doesn't look like a hard task.  I don't know why she wouldn't, but I'm all yours.  Let's do this." 


I could hear the guards laughing among themselves.  What was that all about?  Would I live to regret this decision?  What kind of carnal deeds will I be required to perform at the hands of this beast?  How will I be able to remain true, even if she knows my every thought, when I think it?  Will she allow me to think on my own?  What if she asks me to do something I absolutely refuse to do? 


The guards escort me to a palace.  They show me to my room, which is adorned with yellow lights.  A king sized bed over next to the window.  The window has barbed wire inside the glass.  No one can see out, or in.  The glass is stained yellow.  Statutes are all around the room.  Music is playing.  Instrumentals.  The covers are pulled back on the bed, and a beautiful gown lies in the chair on the side of the dresser.  "Come join me in a bath.  The freshening up will do you good.  We have so much to catch up on.  I intend to make your stay as fulfilling as you allow me to.  I hope you like your room, as this is where you will be living now.  Everything I think you need, will be provided for you.  You only serve me.  With no complaints, either.  You will not want to make me angry, because I can be a real bastard when angered.  Come!" 


The men left the room, and I looked around, before going into the bathroom.  The closets were filled with clothes; most with price tags still visible.  Looking down, shoes of every color.  I walked towards the bathroom door, and I could smell candles burning.  I opened the door.  It was beautiful!


Candles, all around .  Mirrors everywhere.  The ambiance was so romantic, that I could feel myself getting into a mood with this stranger, in this unbelievably intimate setting.  Nothing made sense, but I was drawn to it.  I wanted it.  Even if just for tonight.  I saw her figure, and I gasped.  It was beastly, but erotically drawing me. 


I could see breasts, and her tone was now much lower.  She was laying beneath the bubbles, smiling.  I don't trust that smile.  Damn.  But, why am I drawn to her?  I turn, to step out of my clothes, so I could join her in the tub.  Once naked, I walked towards the tub, and got ready to step in.  I stopped.  She was vigorously stroking her dick.  Oh my damn!  Oh my Damn!   Everything in me quickened.  She could tell I was turned on.  My nipples hardened, and my clit is throbbing.  The biggest dick I have ever seen.  She looked up at me, and said, "SUCK"

4 comments:

  1. are u tellin me no one at all commented on this hot peice of literature!!!!

    EVERYONE BUT ME IS WACK!!!.....lol

    tis hot Jak!

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  2. Ahhh, Sweet Raven....I don't think they appreciate my level of creativity. Some don't reach that far...but, in writing, the sky is your limit!

    Thank you for challenging me, and appreciating my scribe..."smiling"

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  3. :::::::::::::::::::**APPLAUSE** WHISTLES*FINGERSNAPS**::::::::::::::::

    OH MY GOODNESS!!!....This story is what's up ma. Imma need you to add on to it. I was on the edge of my seat and hanging onto your every word.

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  4. AWWWW Byrd....Thank you sooo much!!!

    I will consider it..and if something comes, I will write...this weekend, before the desire to..leaves..

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