Monday, November 27, 2006

Monday's Challenge...BULLSHYT!




Moving in stealth,
arrows poised and ready to shoot.



Here lies the subliminal intent
of an invisible enemy


Hiding


like porcupines in briar


Confiding


causing detrimental harm
and punishment


One unlucky asassinator for hire
Killed in the line of fire
with only one arrow of truth
through the muthafukking head


for misjudging
fudging
everything they said I said


Sludging thru shit
too old to remember


Totally wrong
for the progress you hinder


Always misinterpretated


Always without
any resounding proof


Fuck what you already heard


The acoustics
of these rumors
were already blazing
from anotha bitches word


This stalkin shyt


this talkin shyt


ain't nothing but shyt


Deal with it


infinite BULLSHYT


destined
for Hells Pit



Unloading


Loading again



When will this shyt
ever end...


 


 


jakuper(11/27/06)

13 comments:

  1. clapping
    I feel like riding down upon my steed
    Gripping the reigns
    brandishing my mace
    Bashing skulls into splintered remains

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  2. Great piece...I love your flow with this.

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  3. Zeus...Thanks Man...LOL@ your piece. I can just see you...


    Raven...LOL


    Honey....Thanks

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  4. Blessings. Oh my gawrsh darn! (tryna curb my sailor's mouth) You did tha dang thang, sis... You put it D~O~W~N! OoOh, I'm ready to fight now! I'm down for WHATEVA, ya heard?!? *lol* Seriously, I so enjoyed the angst... That was fantastic... Like raventempest... ROOAARR!! *lol* Thank you for sharing your soul with us, love. Peace within and God bless you.

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  5. Misspoe..."smiling at you" cuz you're so cool...

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  6. Blessings. Awww *blushing* thank you, sis *smile* Peace within and God bless you, love.

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  7. Misspoe...Are you this sweet to everyone you meet...lol Bless you, too Lady

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  8. LOL@Love.....I know this is something...for to be graced with a comment from you!

    Alrighty then!

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  9. I like this. I was looking for my tennis shoes and some vasoline...

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  10. LMAOOOOOO

    It's okay Tish....Sometimes barks are worser than bites. It won';t be needed this time. But, it's good to know I got help...LOL

    thanks for your comment!

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