Saturday, November 4, 2006

KNOCK, KNOCK....A Writing Exercise


Hello Mary
I think it's about time
that we
--meaning you and I
get something straight
This is the last time
you kiss me goodnight
after a completely lovely
romantic
polite date
I refuse to go home alone
one more night
with only my politeness
and virtues on hold
Absurdly tense
with formalism's solemn face
looking back at me
in the rear view mirror every night
Tossing
and turning
with visions of sweet submission
holding me tight
Waiting patiently
no, impatiently
until the time is right
Nada anotha nice hug goodbye
neither a courteous kiss--
a longing sigh
a devious wink
partially suggestive
of your dangerously sexy eye
The glutton in me
is begging to be free
ready to spend an eternity
exploring thee
I need to see
what it is you see
when you close that door
and lock it
tightly behind me
No more mystery
Hospitality...
save it for another day
Let's throw caution to the wind
and let glutton have her way


I don't wanna be


just


your friend no more

6 comments:

  1. dang JA...ur all forward and stuff! Next thing you know you'll be taking it huh? LOL, j/k...nice write!

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  2. laughing....Loc u wild! Of course I won't ...I will beg first...lol

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  3. hmm you would beg ja? sounds interesting

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  4. Enchanting..you know I would...LOL

    thanks for reading Lady

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  5. now that is right the dayum point lol

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  6. Unique...I'm telling you--it sure is...I ahve been there so many times, being patient

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