I will wait
here
as long as it takes
as long as my feelings last
just to feel
your touch
just so you know
I'm missing you
so much
I don't want to save myself
I'd rather lose myself
than lose the chance
to have this date with you
So you can tell me
the truth
just so you can confess
that the proof
is not written on her face
but, it is in my caress
How long should I lay here
and sustain
while
calling out your name
while silently
erotically
very privately
easing my own pain
How long
before it comes to pass
That you want me to have you again.
How long will I be a good girl
before I finally crack
How long do I have to say
It's you that I love
and there's no turning back.
How long
should I just lay here
wet,
and sexually spent
How long
before reality strikes
before
you realize
what it is
I really meant...
Your time is up
jakuper(11/23/06)
damn !! i am breathless
ReplyDeleteTY Enchanting..Didn't mean to take your breath way...LOL
ReplyDeleteWOW...I've felt that way...recently...but...just before I said your time is up...the miracle broke...
ReplyDeleteoh...and by the way...beautifully written...
ReplyDeleteBunny....It's kinda me being silly, I think. Nothing to do, so I took an idea, and ran with it.
ReplyDeleteBut the message is clear... Thanks for your words
devastating
ReplyDeletedrawing me in fully
to expose me
make me vulnerable
to in the end dash me against the rocks
unfulfilled
ended
This was wonderful
Z...Thank you sooo much!
ReplyDelete(P.S. I promise you--at the very moment you sent the invite, I was just clicking on your name to add you...smiling)
LOL that is funny. But i am glad
ReplyDeletethis really caught me up so it was very inspiring at the end to go in a completely opposite direction suddenly
I felt it, nonethe less. You're a great writer....I can tell you love what you write...
ReplyDeletei love the way you make things soooo real joyce. i can always find me somewhere in the pictures your words paint. excellent scribe sis!
ReplyDeleteMidwest...Im glad my words can find you...Thanks
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful JA...and I understand Enchanting's breathlessness...ur exceptional!
ReplyDeleteJeannete....Kind words, from a kind friend! Thanks
ReplyDeleteI bet you didn't even have to hold the pen....the words just tumbled from my lips as I read your writing...so flowing and full of whispered intensity.
ReplyDeletePink...You are just too kind. Of course I had to write it..and put it together...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read!
Blessings. Gurl, there's a lot of folks that I need to say "Your time is up" to... And, no, it's not seXual partners or anything. Just people in my life in general who were only meant for a season, but they're staying longer than that season's time allotted, and they need to get gone. This was very powerful. I did enjoy reading your words, sis. Thank you for sharing your soul with us. Peace within and God bless you, love.
ReplyDeleteMisspoe....I'm glad you could find something inspiring in my words. I do think it could apply to alot of situations..other than relationships...
ReplyDeleteSending blessings bac at Ya!