
“May you have the hindsight to know where you've been,
The foresight to know where you are going,
And the insight to know when you have gone too far”
Would it matter if I told you
you're my bridge across troubled waters,
you're my sunshine after a long soaking rain,
or that your words caress me
where my deepest longing lies
....like a rug...your ambiance covers me
I can't let that go
...even though
you've never felt those things
I know
they are just lines
I can't sell to anyone anymore
For you... it's no longer a distant option
but for me it will always be
That state of regret
is what eats at me the most
I took the waiting
like flowers
Famished...they withered
and just.....died
Sadness echoing across the miles
like the futile washing of cold waves
running hopelessly back to shore
Whispers spoken into ears
that just don't want to hear
I cannot forget you
I cannot express the surprise
of tides turning
when things didn't work out
A part of me
with you,
just as a part of you
a tangible part my reality
In life
and in love,
hindsight is still 20/20
even if I'm still blind
I could no more renounce your presence
than I can denounce the feelings
When I think of where you are
and where I am
I ask myself
would I do it all again
and I answer
Yes!
jak(6/12)

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ReplyDelete...above is the link in case you want to try this challenge...:)
Interesting write. The picture sure does inspire a little melancholy.
ReplyDelete,"sunshine and Flowers...after Rain* ,thats how it should be...optimistic.. thanks joyce xx
ReplyDeletecoincidentally i was listening to set fire to the third bar by snow patrol as i was reading this....just wow. wow wow wow!!
ReplyDeleteLovely write.... Yup and the close is awesome
ReplyDeleteThank you Agent99, Caroline, Roggy, Wolfie, and rafael....for your kind words. I've not been feeling up to par lately but hope to shake it off soon. I apprecaite each of you and then...all of you
ReplyDeleteFeel better.... Hugs
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