Saturday, May 5, 2012

The Last Time.....FIAF #87





















She said, looking up at you, "you're mine"

Watching her grip your head, pulling you into her,
she planted a kiss on your awaiting face

Then, as the tables turned.....on me.....
I watched her handle you....

It was obvious by your glazed-face-juice smile
this wasn't the first time

but....it was sure

the last time








jak(5/5/12)
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17 comments:

  1. Femm fataleMay 5, 2012 at 6:46 AM

    Dayum....sounds hot and volatile

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  2. dana everhartMay 5, 2012 at 6:47 AM

    second reading....I get an eerie chill

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  3. caroline magicMay 5, 2012 at 8:06 AM

    wow..a powerfull pessimism..here

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  4. T JMay 5, 2012 at 11:41 AM

    Hmmm...is this a woman scorned scenario, Joyce? Dangerous to mess with a mad black woman who's been scorned! LOL! I love the mystery of this...we can make of it anything we please! Well done, love!

    How's you? I've been such a bad friend, but you know I love you, right?

    And I need to call Carissa...before she kills me! *grins*

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  5. Kae BMay 5, 2012 at 11:43 AM

    Hmmm...is this a woman scorned scenario, Joyce? Dangerous to mess with a mad black woman who's been scorned! LOL! I love the mystery of this...we can make of it anything we please! Well done, love!

    How's you? I've been such a bad friend, but you know I love you, right?

    And I need to call Carissa...before she kills me! *grins*

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  6. ♥ ♥ dєЬЬїє lуийMay 5, 2012 at 12:10 PM

    Shivers down my spine ... loving it.

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  7. Ornery OneMay 5, 2012 at 10:27 PM

    This is an errie story and i loved it,

    http://whisperingcorridor.multiply.com/journal/item/44/The_imprisoned_man_Fiction_In_A_Flash_87

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  8. Exotic **May 6, 2012 at 5:27 AM

    Poigant...well done.

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  9. L'Angelo MisteriosoMay 6, 2012 at 8:03 AM

    Well done!!

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  10. joyce cooperMay 6, 2012 at 8:43 PM

    lol...Femmie it was just where I found my mind one morning when I awoke....and the picture told the rest...lol

    glad you liked it...

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  11. joyce cooperMay 6, 2012 at 8:44 PM

    ethan....I don't know what to say except thanks for feeling me...lol

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  12. joyce cooperMay 6, 2012 at 8:45 PM

    more like cold revenge, if I could, Caroline

    thanks for the read lady

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  13. joyce cooperMay 6, 2012 at 8:47 PM

    sitting up in that dark room brought the thoughts I wrestle with to light..and thats my story...lol

    thanks!

    No worries about the friendship...I totally understand when life alters relationships, but it doesn't have to suspend or end them unless we want to...:)

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  14. joyce cooperMay 6, 2012 at 8:47 PM

    lol thank you Deb....:)

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  15. joyce cooperMay 6, 2012 at 8:47 PM

    whispering...thanks...revenge is a state of mind that can scare anyone...lol

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  16. joyce cooperMay 6, 2012 at 8:48 PM

    thank you exotic lady!

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  17. joyce cooperMay 6, 2012 at 8:48 PM

    Mr,,thank you much much!!

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