Saturday, February 18, 2012

"Stay"..........A Wordfix@56 Write #18








You really don't have to go..."Stay." 

Soft spoken pleading mercy went unheeded....as if not heard.  Eyes shut tightly, forcing spurned lovers chase in haste.....as human sees the action unfolding.  Another lover kicked to curb in hungry angst....as broken chorus of song curled through caramel lips, "love shoulda..... brought you home..last...night..."





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15 comments:

  1. joyce cooperFebruary 18, 2012 at 1:32 AM

    the challenge link:

    http://wfa56.multiply.com/journal/item/22?mark_read=wfa56:journal:22&replies_read=3

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  2. caroline magicFebruary 18, 2012 at 1:50 AM

    hm,,,friendly persuasion...hardly ever works..with a heartbreak...:(

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  3. joyce cooperFebruary 18, 2012 at 3:09 AM

    you right, Caroline...especially when we trying to prove a point. This one was meant to be comical in a way, as we watch animals and wonder the conversation between them...lol

    thanks for the read...and have a great day!

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  4. Kae BFebruary 18, 2012 at 4:02 AM

    Cute! :)

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  5. L'Angelo MisteriosoFebruary 18, 2012 at 4:22 PM

    Nicely done :)

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  6. joyce cooperFebruary 19, 2012 at 3:48 AM

    thank you Kae....just a little soft humor...lol

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  7. joyce cooperFebruary 19, 2012 at 3:49 AM

    glad you liked this, Mr...and thanks much much...:)

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  8. Babs AFebruary 19, 2012 at 6:02 AM

    sounds like camels are more human than i thought! : )

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  9. joyce cooperFebruary 19, 2012 at 6:37 AM

    Babs, it's almost as if Nature is more human that any of us think.........

    thanks for the read, and for seeing where I was going...:)

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  10. ♥ The Blossoming Fantasia ♥February 20, 2012 at 6:14 AM

    Yes it should have. I like this very much.

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  11. Lori LairdFebruary 20, 2012 at 9:53 AM

    LOL This is cute!

    http://bostonsdandd.multiply.com/journal/item/479

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  12. joyce cooperFebruary 20, 2012 at 10:02 AM

    thankie you!

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  13. joyce cooperFebruary 20, 2012 at 10:07 AM

    thank you bostondandd.....I immediately saw humor and curiosity in this one....lol

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  14. Lynne M-SFebruary 20, 2012 at 4:56 PM

    Do camels have caramel lips, I wonder?
    No, seriously, a great piece.

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  15. joyce cooperFebruary 23, 2012 at 6:13 AM

    thanks lady! lol I don't know..that word just fit right there....:)

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