Thursday, December 29, 2011

Talks In The Kitchen........a Wordfix@56 Write #12









Hold on, my mind just walked past me naked
It's got something it wants me to know


If love begins with me,
I don't mind
It only proves I listened
to all those long talks in the kitchen
when my mother warned me
about walking through the darkness
with my hands tucked hopelessly
in my pockets






jak(12/28/11)

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7 comments:

  1. joyce cooperDecember 29, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    I saw the picture and got my muse to going, and then forgot that it was only 56 words. I also have an extended version of this piece. Thanks to the one who posted, cause it woke my muse up....

    http://jakuper.multiply.com/journal/item/1759?mark_read=jakuper:journal:1759&replies_read=1

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  2. Kitty Konnection PurrrrfectDecember 29, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    In the future, PLEASE don't let your mind wander about NAKED....LOL

    good to hear your muse has awakened...IT SHOWS!!!!

    thanks for joining WFA56 this week, Joyce !

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  3. Frank MannDecember 29, 2011 at 10:25 AM

    Good thing my mind is clothed. This one is a little bent. I like that!

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  4. caroline magicDecember 29, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    its a quaint little story loved,,,,it tyu joyce x

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  5. joyce cooperDecember 29, 2011 at 3:37 PM

    LOL...thank you ladycallie. And yes my muse is awake...glad you liked this

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  6. joyce cooperDecember 29, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    Whocanfigure....thanks. I think the 'naked' meant just getting real...not somethin wild......this time lol

    thanks for the read!

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  7. joyce cooperDecember 29, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    thank you Caroline...this one wrote itself after seeing the phone, and what's in my mind these days....

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