Tuesday, December 20, 2011

SunRISING.........a FIAF #67


















the wish unexpected,
burning within...thins in time
when error becomes an apathetic student
Spring berries cease growing
knowing what's left
when we scream our dreams to the peak of silence
 and don’t tell  them to the world  

Believe your desires
Watch......as segments of yesterday
pass away
and the Sun-rising ushers
a new day

16 comments:

  1. Excellent! Love the last "Watch...as segments of yesterday pass away and the Sun-rising ushers a new day"

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  2. the new day heralds a new,,hopeful start,,sunrise,,inspiring words,:)

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  3. There will always be a witness to beginnings...

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  4. Fantastic write. Thanks for dropping by.

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  5. I see...One shrivel and die giving birth to a new life.

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  6. thank you...it's amazing to watch life pass by and not take it for granted; it makes each day more beautiful...

    Happy Holidays!

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  7. thank you much, Caroline, and Happy Holidays!

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  8. I think so too...even us if we care to admit it..we are the best witnesses....

    :) happy Holidays

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  9. In a way, yes...it like that, but we are the heroes cause we stay to see what happens next...lol

    Thanks and Happy Holidays!

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  10. This is a freaking Masterpiece, Jakuper!

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  11. Sorry so late in replying....thank you! happy New Years to you....

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  12. Stuffed....you woo me with you words and feeling this write...

    thank you thank you thank you! And my apologies for not seeing this over the holidays

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