Wednesday, October 5, 2011

What Cannot Be Frozen.........A Roggy Moving Pic Challenge #32















" As the heart panteth after the water brooks,
so panteth my soul after thee, O God. "


Wouldest thou answer me
as the heart, the beat,
a tear...a chuckle...fear...defeat..
that offers no relief,
the trials...false smiles
the thief who steals;
 the stab, the pain, the rain
that makes me feel
 half alive...half crazy....half satisfied
but not denied
threatens to break my stride

Help me to expect
  to have hope rekindled,
 my prayers remembered,
for the dry seasons in life do not last
because the deluge I face
will just as quickly
be my past
For as the flow of perpetual resistance
tackles the invincible persistence
of being knocked down
and almost drowned,
the result being literally picked up
and spiritually encouraged & backed up
into the road of subsistence

[Now that's what's up]


Help me to see
that reaching out for that unbreakable hold,
the strength in being told
the insistence with which I look up
to the clouds
and only reach down
for a scoop of Nature's gold,
Adam's ale,
H20,
Universal tea,
and that forgiveness lotion,
is understanding's potion
that helps all of us smooth along
 out to a peaceful sea
It's just some more living,
some more giving
back and sharing
life's serum



If I can't keep up
wouldest thou please catch me up
help me to learn to total up
the difference between
what is meant from what is said,
what is important
and what should be the tail
and not the head


 Just as streams running waters
cannot congeal,
what cannot be broken is what is true
Cleansing heals
 love that flows
freely from the heart
that knows
'it cannot be frozen'

by adversity













jakuper (10/5/11)

19 comments:

  1. ..must be hope ..rekindled
    always with ,,"Natures gold"!..beautifully expressed

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  2. yes it is, Caroline...and I thank you for feeling that hope with me....:)

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  3. almost speechless here. that so filled me!! the pic of the running water fed me. how can i thank you Joyce?

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  4. Joyce, this is incredibly clever .

    The rhythm's beat, almost-rap,
    adds a feeling of the slap-
    and-trickle of the water;
    nature's giggle, as we oughter!

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  5. Babs...you just did....as you read and was fed, just like I was in the midst of a painful experience recently...and someone else understanding what I was feeling, and saying. Thank you for being where you are, and connecting to where I am....

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  6. Redpenn...yea...feelings were bursting out all over...good feelings overriding where I was, and taking me through that bursting flow of water. I appreciate that you liked my pen strokes...and your own redpenn evokes....:)

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  7. 'Just as streams running waters
    cannot congeal,
    what cannot be broken is what is true
    Cleansing heals
    love that flows
    freely from the heart
    that knows
    'it cannot be frozen''

    Loved this bit.

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  8. Thank you poeticeros.....I appreciate you taking time to read....and feel this part...

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  9. love how youve involved the qualities of water so cleverly

    have you read my emotions in motions blog?

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  10. thank you Roggy....I don't understand what you meant by the last statement...explain please

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  11. Your blog reminded me of mine so I reposted it
    Of course yours is more articulate :P

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  12. fantastic!!! I got lost in the poem of such majestic description
    and soothing calm waters!!

    http://kata24.multiply.com/journal/item/1182/Moving_Images_Challenge_32

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  13. Kata..thank you for taking time to read and feel me....:)

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  14. thank you digitalnomad.....I appreciate that.....and love all you do!

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  15. I'm starting to really look forward to reading your work. It's always totally original and pushes me to think. I love the way you combine words in new patterns. It's like a work of art, just great. :))

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  16. Ms Ag...thank you. I challenge myself to write out the box, because words just come to me, and they beg to be released, and I just pour them out. Glad you like the style I use these days....

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