Thursday, October 6, 2011

Reminiscing..........Kae's FIAF Challenge #56










If I had my druthers we'd be right here
preaching to the choir
reminiscing in echoes of endemic laughter
undressing the past supposed to be spent
 peacefully strolling past log cabins,
 talking over picked fences
strolling over billowy greenish orange knolls
 re-connecting defected, votary souls
recalling the first time love knocked on our heart's door









jakuper (10/6/11)

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12 comments:

  1. Kae BOctober 6, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    Awww! This is nostalgic, somehow! Very nice, Joyce!

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  2. caroline magicOctober 6, 2011 at 12:10 PM

    lovely ..soft reminiscent

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  3. joyce cooperOctober 6, 2011 at 3:17 PM

    thanks Kae..it is, for me, anyway :)

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  4. joyce cooperOctober 6, 2011 at 3:17 PM

    yes, Caroline...and thanks for feeling it...

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  5. Initiative StainOctober 6, 2011 at 8:48 PM

    I have no clue as to what fiaf is Joyce but what I do know
    is these are words which are kindled within a manner of which
    is soothing within the read.

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  6. joyce cooperOctober 7, 2011 at 5:26 AM

    FIAF is fiction in a flash, which is a writing challenge from one of my friends where you write a fictional caption to weekly selected pictures. The flash part is that it is limited to a certain number [55] words.....tis kinda fun and you don't really have a membership criteria....just a desire to participate....

    thanks for checking this out.....and maybe sometimes you might want to try one....

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  7. L'Angelo MisteriosoOctober 8, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    Beautiful Joyce. :)

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  8. joyce cooperOctober 8, 2011 at 7:58 PM

    thank you kindly...:)

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  9. Katey kaleidoscopeOctober 9, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    Very nice!
    http://kateykaleidoscope.multiply.com/journal/item/627/FIAF_56

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  10. marlicia fernandezOctober 10, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    I read this over a couple of times. I really like it, but it seems vaguely sad, somehow...regretful. It makes me wonder what happened. Very descriptive and well done!

    God bless...
    http://shadowlight1.multiply.com/journal/item/80/FIAF_56_Contrasts_WC_55

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  11. joyce cooperOctober 10, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    Thanks Kate....I think I been to your page, but let me make sure...on the way

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  12. joyce cooperOctober 10, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    Shadow...how perceptive is your intuition, for this was written off the winds of a fictional moment that I know will never happen...and the scene just brought it out....so I thank you for the read..and your interpretive abilities...:)

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