Monday, October 31, 2011

Nature's Presence..........a CRC Challenge #54














Birds flying high
...
pretty blue sky
Natures presents/presence
so beautiful to the eye


Look...here comes the Sun
A new day has begun


It's alright as morning joins
...
ascending outwards
upwards

backwards
as my mental recollects tendrils of memories

of when there was an insurgency of we
....
an importunate action,
a compression of thinking,
open resistance,
fists raised
....
wanna...gonna...fight, fight, fight
for what we feel is right

It's alright if I still feel vibes enshrouding me,
visions of fingers decorating awaiting skin..
seeing we
...you and me...
loving
again and again
turning thinking from out....to within
Intimate intentions covering you,
enticed bodies barely breathing, yet so alive
when we touch
It's alright...but never too much
if you touch me...with tenderness,
touch me with love,
touch me with.....sigh
touch me with honor
take my will to heights unbeknown to me
and blessed from the One above
Baptize me....in sanctified love,
fill me with your spirit...completely
Breathe into me bonded adoration
and trusted faithfulness
Make me know
that what exists has always been
few words we speak because.....none needed
We just catch up
emotionally

It only takes one look from behind quiet eyes
to define the contents of your mind,
and to decide why we try to hide
from feelings our bodies undeviating-ly provide
So thick is the air between us
when we meet
that it only takes a cough to bring us back
to reality
It's alright though
It's like willing the moment to occur
amid seconds and minutes we waited within
 for this destiny to begin

As time drags old emotions back
I have to ask
....
as the flicker turns to a flame...
were they really old timbers
of feelings hidden deep
or some potential quantum leap

that we now call by name








jakuper (10/31/11)

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7 comments:

  1. I especially like these lines:

    "few words we speak because none are needed
    We just catch up
    emotionally."

    Those expressed words can be a 'mate' or a special friend......a beautiful connection!

    very, very nice!

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  2. thank you ladycallie...glad you enjoyed it. It is for a special friend....as these days no mate is in sight lol

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  3. I walk the path of memory with you...and could so vividly visualize the horizon you detailed so eloquently

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  4. Oh, I like this. Its structure is unusual, and effectively so. Great to read thoroughly

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  5. Heidi...thank you for taking time to walk out with me.....I sure miss those days...

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  6. redpenn...thank you for reading/feeling it through...thoughts sometimes pour out like showers....

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  7. ...and the music didn't hurt it a bit lol

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