Monday, October 24, 2011

Knock, Knock........A Word Fix @56 Write















"Knock, knock, old man" says muh neighbor, as I woke one day and realized...I musta been sleeping while cooking, cause smoke was coming outta the kitchen.   My eggs burnt up and he came and checked on me.   Guess you could say he saved my life.

Gonna be hard looking across the lawn...and he ain't there..........


16 comments:

  1. Friends in unexpected places. What would we do without them?

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  2. tinged in sadness......You get to a certain age and loved ones and friends pass and suddenly you are ALONE!

    wonderful, Joyce, thanks for getting your fix with WFA56 !

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  3. true, awordsmith...and that we sometimes wait until they gone to realize it....

    thanks for the read....:)

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  4. So true, ladycallie....it's just a reality that is sentimentally heartbreaking when you have to go through it...when it's close to home...

    Thanks for feeling me...

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  5. thank you Caroline...I guess you're the only one to see the whole story, as I forgot the rules and had to edit lol

    glad you like it...lol

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  6. A very nice, rather bittersweet, little tale. It's hard when friends are lost. Nicely written...It's a good reminder to let the people we care about know how we feel before that isn't an option. Thanks for sharing.

    God bless...

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  7. Hmmm... so this guy might be a spook.

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  8. I wanna know what happened to his friend!
    SEQUEL!

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  9. Shadow, thank you..and I apologize [TO EVERYONE] for the lateness in commenting. I guess I got lost in posts and writing.......

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  10. initiative...thanks for stopping by!

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  11. lol Noooo whocanfigure.....he is watching the body of his best buddy be taken out to the morgue. He died in his sleep.....

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  12. Kevin...lol, thanks man. I missed you, but I know you were doing you..so it's all good....

    He watched his buddy be taken to the morgue. he died in his sleep...so sad...

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