Monday, October 17, 2011

Candy Love.........A CRC#52 Challenge



As selfishness and complaint pervert the mind, so love with its joy clears and sharpens the vision."
~~Helen Keller~~


.....
that I once deemed love
as my weakness, my Achilles heel,
the key to my [junior]mint of love,
my [almond]joy, my [nutrageous]ecstacy
and my sweet tooth fulfilled...
by the trace of the [turtle]footprints
leading to my heart, and by the whatchamacallits
that gave my kit kat good & plenty paydays
(chuckles)
I'll have you know.......now I know....
I had no taste at all

Is there no more competition out here...
no more [3]musketeers, or baby[Ruths], or butter fingers
or airhead squeals that promise to bust the speakers of my ticker?
The resilient me who once had everything to fear
snickers...for I have nothing to fear
even as much as I loved the romance...the [hershey]kisses
the foreplay....the fun
...the simple pleasures in surprises,
touches....

is my timing so imperfect twixt life and love
that to attempt to snatch love
from the [nestle]crunch of winds whispering by
just to savor and enjoy it....all that matters?
Are days and hours of not being desirous to the almost extinct palate
of fastbreaks to starbursts and milky ways
the way of nerds?
If you say so...I say "ripit...ripit
ripit"

For these [pay]days now....
as doves treasure the little moments
of having fun encoded in [chocolate]drops
dare we not make our existence so imprisoned
by love lost or just not around
that passion for one moment should stop
I say let's make mounds of love
and when the loving is sour[patch]
let us even the score(skor)

' hands off the candy
and nobody gets hurt !!'







jakuper (10/17/11)

12 comments:

  1. This is well done. i really love this. Thanks a million for participating.

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  2. so entertaining and creative...an awesome display of one who is richly blessed in talent!

    btw....I really liked it....LOL

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  3. thank you digital! I'm glad you liked this.....it was supposed to be light and 'sweet' lol

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  4. Much obliged, ladycallie.....I enjoyed opening up my mind for this unusual picture....

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  5. thank you much Deb! it's one of my favorite hobbies...

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  6. Love the way you worked so many sweet things into the main train of thought!
    Good writing...

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  7. thanks redpenn...it's the first thought that came to mind when I saw the candies....

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  8. What, no caramel?!!

    ...my stash is well hidden :p

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  9. no body ..gets Hurt,,! wonderful..!x

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  10. I wanted to, Delilah..but I also wanted to cut it short....and I thank you for liking my taste in words and this challenge....

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  11. That's right Caroline..chocolate saves the day...again lol Thanks lady!

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