
Admitting that you've been here in my head....
almost since the beginning is a little embarrassing,
to say the least
How you've been entangled in my proliferation of oozing emotions--
you know....the ones that keep sweeping over us...like cooling water
every day....since I met you
...
they always make me anxious
You....sitting across from me
as I try to figure out your thinking process
obsesses the rhythm of my heartbeats
I be all to pieces trying to make me as comfortable as you look
and it takes me....into a zone
An electric zone I try to control right there...
in the ambiance of that moment
My hands tell the story of how nervous I really am
Though you'd think the percolating waters excite me,
they actually seem to calm me
flooding fluidly free.....
reminding me of life's ongoing journey
and how we must follow our deepest inclinations
even when others think we are crazy
and...as we wait for answers..... that may never come
devoted we be....to a sort of blind hope
in a faith that is so unsure
but is sure...
as sure as this water
palpitates
Listen to my heartbeat stabilizing
as my fingers are baptized as I look into my mind's mirror
This circling around my fingertips.....is just as alive as my feelings
which chart an effectual evolution of emotions
descrying the beauty of life
Time stops
.....as the plagiarizing of the stream of our dreams
as I would...
that I could....
cup this water into my palms
and we toast to this fresh moment
so clean
......so clear......
so unharmed
That we could feed....from the strength we find
in it's flow
Oh, to wash away every un-pure thought,
every generational dysfunction,
every impending intricacy
as our hands commune
under conjunctive christening
Life may be distorted....
but our acme of truth
when we answer to living
in the continence of life
.....
because we can
.....
is very clear
jakuper (9/20/11)
almost since the beginning is a little embarrassing,
to say the least
How you've been entangled in my proliferation of oozing emotions--
you know....the ones that keep sweeping over us...like cooling water
every day....since I met you
...
they always make me anxious
You....sitting across from me
as I try to figure out your thinking process
obsesses the rhythm of my heartbeats
I be all to pieces trying to make me as comfortable as you look
and it takes me....into a zone
An electric zone I try to control right there...
in the ambiance of that moment
My hands tell the story of how nervous I really am
Though you'd think the percolating waters excite me,
they actually seem to calm me
flooding fluidly free.....
reminding me of life's ongoing journey
and how we must follow our deepest inclinations
even when others think we are crazy
and...as we wait for answers..... that may never come
devoted we be....to a sort of blind hope
in a faith that is so unsure
but is sure...
as sure as this water
palpitates
Listen to my heartbeat stabilizing
as my fingers are baptized as I look into my mind's mirror
This circling around my fingertips.....is just as alive as my feelings
which chart an effectual evolution of emotions
descrying the beauty of life
Time stops
.....as the plagiarizing of the stream of our dreams
as I would...
that I could....
cup this water into my palms
and we toast to this fresh moment
so clean
......so clear......
so unharmed
That we could feed....from the strength we find
in it's flow
Oh, to wash away every un-pure thought,
every generational dysfunction,
every impending intricacy
as our hands commune
under conjunctive christening
Life may be distorted....
but our acme of truth
when we answer to living
in the continence of life
.....
because we can
.....
is very clear
jakuper (9/20/11)

Nice write.
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thanks nikhilpant...I'm on my way to check yours out
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of mine...only yours is much more positive and upbeat! Yours says, there's hope! Great job!
ReplyDeleteits so lyrical and musical and i just like it!!!
ReplyDeletethanks Kae....just the flow of the water guided my ink strokes...
ReplyDeleteglad you do, Roggy....and might I add I am glad to be inspired by you...
ReplyDeleteby me? hehe. oh you mean the pix :P
ReplyDeleteby you...because it's what's in your brain that perceives where you want to take the minds of us, individually, and collectively. The pics are just an instrument of your mental interpretations, dude...:)
ReplyDeleteawww I'm a puppeteer :P
ReplyDeleteThere is something about water, isn't there? You can't help but be drawn to it on an emotional level and changed by it.
ReplyDeleteyes, AG, and since I am an Aquarian, I used to think that was the reason....but it is powerful nonetheless...
ReplyDeletethanks for checking this one out....
i like the electrifying ooze of emotion here. cool :)
ReplyDeletethank you Ms runcinnamon.....glad you stopped by to read....
ReplyDeleteyes some answers will...never come:)
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