Monday, August 22, 2011

In Limbo.....A FIAF Bonny Challenge #50







What have I done
that I can't answer your questions
My freedom
hopes that time eats this eclipse

 Not looking backwards..but you can
 I'm just pressing start
Now.... through this artist's eyes
no more skies crying

 Just teaching great lessons
about detached love
and this imperturbation between us
being a curse

or a blessing






jakuper (8/22/11)

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21 comments:

  1. Kitty Konnection PurrrrfectAugust 22, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    hmmmm detached love....no love at all would be more merciful!

    FIAF # 50 " Adrianna "

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  2. joyce cooperAugust 22, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    Ladycallie...you used the right word...mercy. I like that. Thanks for checking it out....

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  3. Virginia ~August 22, 2011 at 9:50 AM

    I agree with Linda. Detached love sounds like purgatory.

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  4. joyce cooperAugust 22, 2011 at 10:24 AM

    but that is the choice for some....and thanks for blending your thoughts in...:)

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  5. caroline magicAugust 22, 2011 at 12:38 PM

    .I often wondered about "Detached ,Love?..not for me:)

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  6. joyce cooperAugust 22, 2011 at 1:03 PM

    it's almost as bad as having a piece of man, or a receiver and not the phone lol The picture just looks like one contemplating the loss of something

    Thanks for taking a read, lady!

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  7. Kae BAugust 22, 2011 at 2:33 PM

    Not taking things at face value, eh?

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  8. joyce cooperAugust 22, 2011 at 2:58 PM

    for someone...it is true, and it reminds me of a scene I pondered the thoughts that I never could figure out...thanks Bonny, for posting a picture that is worth so so many more words....

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  9. Carissa RAugust 22, 2011 at 3:39 PM

    sometimes there is no other choice. Love cannot just be clicked off.

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  10. Carissa RAugust 22, 2011 at 3:40 PM

    This reads on the surface very sad, but if you dig underneath it all, it is one of the prettiest (shorty) ones I have read from you.

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  11. Mysty Fairy~dragonsAugust 22, 2011 at 4:51 PM

    this one makes you think deeply. I gotta re-read it again and again to get the full thought I love it

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  12. joyce cooperAugust 22, 2011 at 5:10 PM

    awww, and you're right ...it's not sad...it's just a reflective moment

    Thanks lady for feeling that...

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  13. joyce cooperAugust 22, 2011 at 5:14 PM

    It is layered but mostly it's saying..".Not looking backwards..but you can
    I'm just pressing start
    Now.... through this artist's eyes
    no more skies crying"......I replaced eyes with skies just to raise the poetic otency of this beautiful picture...

    thanks mystydragons....for checking it out....:)...

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  14. Katey kaleidoscopeAugust 23, 2011 at 8:37 AM

    Strong words. Very clever.

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  15. joyce cooperAugust 23, 2011 at 8:51 AM

    Thank you Katey....I love writing scenes unusual, and compelling....

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  16. Mysty Fairy~dragonsAugust 23, 2011 at 9:11 AM

    I meant it was really good because I like poems that make you think.. what does it mean to me and to the writer. :)

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  17. joyce cooperAugust 23, 2011 at 9:24 AM

    Mysty..that's good...and that's how I am trying to write lately, where it makes you stop and listen....I am just happy you stopped by to read me...and you like Poetry as much as I do...:)

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  18. irene fergusonAugust 23, 2011 at 5:06 PM

    Either way it's fate...for the best I hope....I liked this.
    http://ferioliv.multiply.com/journal/item/1646/FIAF_50

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  19. joyce cooperAugust 23, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    ferioliv..thank you so much for reading me..and liking this...:)

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  20. Giles Y OwenAugust 27, 2011 at 12:52 AM

    Very interesting, as I was readig an article yesterday in a waiting room magazine about the rising number of women who want nude portraits done in middle age and how they interact with the artists.

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  21. joyce cooperAugust 30, 2011 at 4:40 AM

    thankyou gilesy!

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