Friday, June 24, 2011

Love's Sabbatical.....A Roggy's #18 MP Challenge & SP Challenge

Your smile
manifesting-ly magnetizing
 as you rip into my attention
Your laughter....undeniably untamed
as I fight my dissent-ion
Your touch...tenderly unshakable
a pound of cure
....unbreakable....
for my ounce of prevention
Your eyes....so alive
 they twinkle in
rapaciousness
they blink
..in covetous petition..
in
entreated
hunger










I still feel the sting
of your blink
and your Mazarin wink
as
it
speaks
softly
to me
accosting me
as you look through me
deep into me
with indigo intentions
to pursue me
under those
unhidden sparkles of desire

You
......
you
...
you started this fire
and I can't forget none of it
I can't get away from it,
not even if you asked me to

Every time our auras connect
...
I defect to you
 a crouched ball
of beneficent blue flames
as hearing your name encompasses me
and thoughts romp righteously
in front of me
I stand the pain...I bid the rain ado
You're tempting me..
you're preempting me
and I don't know what to do

In forbidden strengths
you create un-forbidden lengths
causing unusual cherubic illumination
that demands
my unmitigated participation
in this unimpeachable yearn for you

You ask me
.....
how can I ache
for something I've not had
and crave so much for someone
 I've never held
within my unequivocal touch

I close my eyes so tight
until I answer those blinks
 with what my own heart  thinks
 I open my own eyes
and the flames give instruction to the game
that our combined auras procure

I intend to create a sabbatical of love
that
only
you
and
I
can
endure









jakuper (6/24/11)

11 comments:

  1. .that is a perfect idea..Sabbatical:)
    I love your words..aura...and...colour .Indigo...
    I was swept along..loved it..joyce :)[hugs]

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  2. .this is good joyce.I love the idea.of a sabbatical:)
    and love your wording....
    aurora..and indigo..intentions..
    I was swept along by it..

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  3. thank you so much Caroline....

    I just got to imagine what the eyes would be saying to one when they catch each others gaze...and the conversation is endless in such a short time.....

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  4. There are a lot of interesting ideas woven into this poem..concepts that make me have to stop and think that new thought.

    In forbidden strengths
    you create un-forbidden lengths ...

    Every time our auras connect
    ...I defect to you..

    They are concepts that need to sink into the understanding..and when they do there is an appreciation of the feeling.

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  5. thank you Delilah.....I love mixing words & taking them to new depths and heights...


    'in forbidden strengths'...meaning they tell me I'm not supposed to feel this .....and so on

    auras connecting...has to do with the pic in the piece, and describing what the feeling looks like when two people who are so attracted get together...and the awesome colors and energy it makes between them...lol

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  6. I get what you mean. I did have to look up Mazarin..although I am still not sure whether that's a reference to the cardinal?

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  7. I used the term to describe the eyes in the above picture according to dictionary.com's definition of 'a deep, rich blue"....:)

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  8. oh, thank you for the explanation. It's a good word.

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  9. coolio...:) and thank you for the appreciation of my work

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  10. *gasping for air* Oh wow Joycie!
    That was awesomeness wrapped in magnificence.
    *feels chills* I resemble the words you've written and they speak to my heart...
    Well done!

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  11. thank you Ms T!! and how've you been...hope things are coming together for you on all levels of living....

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