Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Just Like I Dreamed (Add A Line)




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It happened...
just like I dreamed
angel wings
flapping as they carried me
along the shore
Determined was I to even the score
that I ran instead of walked
I knew it wasn't the end
I needed to know so much more

So, looking inquisitively into the sky
my questions began..

it must be a happy person..here..
I only dream of floating along a river...
in a little boat..
with a white parasol..
smiling at the ...world

If not now...and if not later....
than when?

Here was time,
Bendable, mendable
And yet I unreachable
Limbo beforth me,
Limbo behindeth me,
Time spreading, distorting,
Waves of disorient cascading..


the smell of fresh salted water
and seagulls hanging mighty close
accompanied me as the Sun upon me
began to boast

it already knew
that time is the answer to every question
Acceptance and discovery...
that's what I felt like
as I was carried along the way

bobbing amidst the motions
......
a bouy upon the ebb'n'flo'




Where was I being taken to
Why me...why did I have to go there
How long does it take to get there
why can't I trust the journey




11 comments:

  1. ..it must be a happy person..here..
    I only dream of floating along a river...in a little boat..with a white parasol..smiling at the ...world..

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  2. So, looking inquisitively into the sky
    my questions began....
    I let my my mind wander...refusing to ask why

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  3. Here was time,
    Bendable, mendable
    And yet I unreachable
    Limbo beforth me,
    Limbo behindeth me,
    Time spreading, distorting,
    Waves of disorient cascading...

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  4. the smell of fresh salted water
    and seagulls hanging mighty close
    accompanied me as the Sun upon me
    began to boast

    it already knew
    that time is the answer to every question
    Acceptance and discovery...
    that's what I felt like
    as I was carried along the way

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  5. Bobbing amidst the motions,
    A bouy upon the ebb 'n' flo',

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  6. Where was I being taken to
    Why me...why did I have to go there
    How long does it take to get there
    why can't I trust the journey

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  7. lovely!...clapping this is so refreshing...GGGGOOOOD I miss the beach...such a fitting piece

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  8. Thank you Sassy, sorry you missed the adding a line. it seems like when it comes to an end...it just stops by itself....lol

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  9. b e a u t i f u l.....

    what a playful ambrosia of words... beautiful minds... write alike... B R A V O

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  10. I know'd there wuzzz a God! lol Thank you Sugga...and it feels good to see and feel you around here again....I hope you want to write together soon....

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