feeling this...this rumbling tremble
as I'm nearing you
Reality becomes instantly cloudy
as you have this way about you
warm
.....encompassing....
mysterious
My hands...automatically seek permission
to touch you as we greet
Everything inside me makes me say...
"Jeg Elsker Dig"
Dignity escapes me as I dance over to you
introducing myself as
your
next
nightmare
jakuper (4/26/11)
Original and complex, that's becoming a recurring characteristic of your writing. I like it a lot. :))
ReplyDeletethank you Ms mythical. I try to write outside my own box...lol
ReplyDeleteWell that's not gonna last long introducing yourself like that. LOL
ReplyDeleteI like this!
Ha....Ms T, who knows...when you meet someone, it usually just lasts a short time, and maybe not to a good end. But we can just hope it ends good...lol
ReplyDeletethanks for the read...and for liking this...
Very nice, Joyce!
ReplyDeleteThank you Bonny, sorry it took so long...but my muse is a lil cloudy lately lol
ReplyDeleteNot a problem! :)
ReplyDeletecoolness....:)
ReplyDeleteeek!
ReplyDeleteat least u were honest! *giggling*
ReplyDeleteI guess you could pull off a line like that if your dance moves were dangerous...lol...watch out for the tootsies!
ReplyDeletelol...yep aka a twist lol
ReplyDeletethanks ducky!
aha...being realistic, cause it might not be all that interesting or captivating once you get closer lol
ReplyDeletethanks for reading lady!
LOL...I be watching out for all the moves, but I just love the 'dance' never a dull moment, Frances
ReplyDeletethanks for the read, lady
:) im not much of a dancer...
ReplyDeletethis was cool J :) i liked it.