Tuesday, March 29, 2011

The Last Time (FIAF #29)





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the last time
I let him fall this low.....into temptation. 
Penciling words...confessing.....
only to God.  But what does it mean when I'm not recompensing?   I love him. 

In the dark regretting..... deceiving her....my soul....for the exasperation in my loins...
can't believe we're doing it again.......scribbling.....

one more time won't hurt




jakuper (3/29/11)
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18 comments:

  1. joyce cooperMarch 29, 2011 at 6:24 AM

    **Bonny, I hope I did it right;, haven't done one in a minute lol

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  2. Jo BMarch 29, 2011 at 6:46 AM

    Love just is, eh?

    I have been there. Sometimes I could not even count on two hands my "one more times".

    ,

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  3. joyce cooperMarch 29, 2011 at 6:51 AM

    Yuuuup, expressive...lol I wrote a piece titled--my last last time lol

    Thanks for stopping by!

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  4. Frances ~~~~~~March 29, 2011 at 7:10 AM

    well done in 55 words.
    one more time is going to be the last time one time :)

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  5. caroline carolineMarch 29, 2011 at 7:15 AM

    ah.last .fateful..time:)

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  6. Sassy MsSharonMarch 29, 2011 at 7:15 AM

    Lovely Joyce....

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  7. joyce cooperMarch 29, 2011 at 7:16 AM

    lol yes it is, Frances. but in so many ways some things we can't stop doing..we never will. but there are some things I will never stop trying to do...lol

    thank you for seeing it like I do...lol

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  8. joyce cooperMarch 29, 2011 at 7:18 AM

    Thanks Caroline....and only we know when that last time is... Smiling

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  9. joyce cooperMarch 29, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    Thank you Sassy!! Running over and jumping on your bac hugging you from behind...hey there!

    lol

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  10. michelle jMarch 29, 2011 at 8:04 AM

    the first last time huh... ive been there,
    :) nice write j

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  11. Kae BMarch 29, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    You did it right, Joyce! :) And it is very well done, too! Very poignant!

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  12. joyce cooperMarch 29, 2011 at 9:41 AM

    thank you Chelley so much :)

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  13. joyce cooperMarch 29, 2011 at 9:42 AM

    Thank you lady! Glad you like it....

    And now on to the dialogue challenge...

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  14. Kae BMarch 29, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    Have fun! :)

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  15. Mythical MagpieMarch 29, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    To err is human so they say.

    Very powerful writing :))

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  16. joyce cooperMarch 30, 2011 at 7:43 AM

    working on it now...

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  17. joyce cooperMarch 30, 2011 at 7:46 AM

    working on it now :)

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  18. joyce cooperMarch 30, 2011 at 7:49 AM

    yes it is..mythical....thanks for feeling this one

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