Just play it cool
and this promotion is yours, girlfriend
"un-huhhh"
Now, pay attention
She's going to attempt to use her charms on him
He's pretending to like the attention
He'll set up a meeting with her
for later
but...he'll make some excuse
He won't show up
because he will be with his man
jakuper (11/13/10)
Oooooh! What a twist! Soooo good, Joyce! LOL!
ReplyDeleteLOL Yeah, this one has thousands of possible plot twists...lol
ReplyDeleteThanks
:)
ReplyDeletethat is classic..nice Joyce
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks Eros....they look awfully cool in their scheming minds, don't they...? lol
ReplyDeletelol...yes ma'am
ReplyDeletelol poor chick hehe
ReplyDeleteCreatively unique take
...too cute...Clever twist. love it!..smiling...
ReplyDeleteInteresting interpretation! Question: What does FIAF stand for?
ReplyDeleteAnother side to the tale.I like this version.
ReplyDeleteThanks! lol yea...they really look like they are in the know.....about something lol
ReplyDeletethank you lady...I try to think out the box...lol
ReplyDeleteThanks...I like writing to surprise...lol
ReplyDeleteFiction in a Flash..its a poetic challenge. let me get you the page link where I got it from
thank you, neuron. As I said I wanted to think away from what it looks like...
ReplyDeletehttp://bonnymom.multiply.com/journal/item/271/Fiction_in_a_Flash_Week_10
ReplyDelete*smile*
ReplyDeleteGood twist - again something completely different
ReplyDeletehttp://tabbynera.multiply.com/journal/item/1470/Fiction_in_a_Flash_-_Week_10_Small_Talk
I like it that you didnt go for the obvious.
ReplyDeleteClever and conniving females! Watch and learn from us... heeheee :)
ReplyDeleteHow neat that ur a twin! :)
I love their little black dresses! :)
Thanks! Maybe I can participate in these from time to time.
ReplyDeletehahahahaha too funny!
ReplyDeleteDang..
smiling back...thanks for stopping by
ReplyDeleteYes, Thanks Tabby, they all are unique and that's so cool!
ReplyDeleteI try, Frances...and it's so challenging going deeper in interpretations ...lol
ReplyDeleteclapping...you right lol Thanks for the read!
ReplyDeleteI'd like it if you did, Space. I just jumped in there myself a few weeks ago...
ReplyDeleteLOL you know it Thanks lady!
ReplyDeletelol A great twist. It is so cool how we each see a different story in the pic.
ReplyDeletehttp://expressiveespressojo.multiply.com/journal/item/56/Fiction_In_A_Flash_10_A_Good_Crop
Expressive, thanks for coming to read....
ReplyDeleteVery twisty!
ReplyDeletelol thanks skyerider!
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