Friday, July 3, 2009

Breathing You In...A SPII Exercise





" I took a deep breath
and listened to the old bray of my heart:
I am, I am, I am..."

~Sylvia Plath~



open for you



" With you I have lost the ability to feign indifference.
you know play it off like..*shrug*.."It don't much mattah..
everything about you matters....from if you think of me when and what..
to if I even on occasion cause your heart to smile..
or do a lil dance...
Knowing that your happiness means as much to me as my own.
I have loved you ardently..honestly, purely, and openly
and in many ways more truly than I ever imagined possible..."
~Naturali~



but...wait

let me start....back at the beginning of you
let me catch my breath

before I run my tongue
down
the
length
of
you
...
stopping

along your aura
and resting my pulsating fingertips
right there

.......deep sigh......


in the center of you


Excuse me...while I slowly
gasp
for my next breath

because you got me all caught up
.....

breathless
.....

softly huffing
and puffing

into thin air



I am breathing you in



With the pain
comes the rain
the drips of life....from you
Me....straining to compose myself
making you....lose your breath

Just the thought of consuming every drop of you
and to drink until
I am filled

...aaaaahhh....

 


just takes my breath away







Jakuper (7/3/09)

12 comments:

  1. With the pain
    comes the rain
    the drips of life....from you
    Me....straining to compose myself
    making you....lose your breath

    Just the thought of consuming every drop of you
    and to drink until
    I am filled

    ...aaaaahhh....




    just takes my breath away


    Ahhhhhhhh yet another winner.

    Soooooo sensual

    And hot

    Still fanninggggggggg!

    Goddess

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  2. Thank you My friend.....it's just me thinking out loud,again lol

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  3. Yeah mommma. You're doing it again. You're messing me up with your words.

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  4. Thank you Ms Byrdie...

    I just love you loving my work..and especially when you read it....

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  5. very nice...jak jak...i loved it!!!

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  6. when you think out loud, wonderous things
    happen. makes me wonder what thoughts
    are hidden....hmmmmm?

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  7. Why thank you Miss Sofia Sofia//

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  8. Gas...thanks. But you don't wanna know those thoughts that file past my mental eye....uninvited lol

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  9. Tammm! Thanks lady; glad you liked it

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  10. DAYUM....DAYUM....DAYUM.....I GUESS I MISSED THIS ONE.....WELL THAT'S WHY I'M LURKING....SO I CAN SEE WHAT I MISSED.....

    J....NOTICE THE CAPITAL LETTER......J....THIS IS A HOT LITTLE NUMBER.....I'M GONNA GO CHANGE.....

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  11. 'Bout time you catch up, woman! lol Thanks love

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