a kissa warm hug
that's what I was thinking of
Moments shared
lying beneath
honeysuckle scented candles
casting shadows in a darkened room
Wills inert to explain
Bodies obeying commands
from burning hands
again and again
until
teardrops fall.....
"Moments stolen by fairy-tale dreams"
~jakuper(5/26/07)
Aww. I don't know who that person was, but I feel sorry for them. Sharing an intimate moment then being hurt enough to cry. :(
ReplyDeleteGood read!
wow... such a tender write... it feels almost serene...
ReplyDeleteexcellently done, Miss J!
Poetess.....TY so much....
ReplyDeleteBuffi....I'm glad you could feel the piece, although it is not a sad memory. lol.
ReplyDeleteIt was remembering that it was so intense, that it brought tears to my eyes that was so memorable
J this is beautiful. Its succinct yet sweet. Like a quick kiss on the cheek before goodbye.
ReplyDeleteSuch soft and supple expressions, love the word usage and layout. You can actually feel the passion and adore in the words that you released so beautifully. To experience such a moment is a moment to cherish… passion without stipulations. I love it.
ReplyDeleteMythtree...That kinda sounds right. lol
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Blaq...By damn, I think you got it. Just me remembering...
ReplyDeleteMemories can be so beautiful, even after love has long gone....
Thanks for feeling me...
That was nice... I like that...
ReplyDeletewetkisses...Thanks. got me smiling.....
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