
Just another lonely mermaid...
she laid there
in her favorite spot
in the safe shadows of complacency
sadly somber
heart--broken
once
again
Sitting so still there
No sun
No more fun
Daylight
gone
nursing her pain,
wiping away tears...
tears that were now free to fall
tears that make her feel
like she was going insane
After the last time giving
all that she had to give
So sad that she never once considered
what she needed in return
or....
that she still needed 'her' to live
Yet, she tossed her own self aside
trying to share her heart
eager to take that enchanted ride
that ended
with loneliness
and the painful breaking of her heart
Echoes of laughter
and the good times that she had
now bounced off the mental spaces
the walls.....
that both of them
had carelessly scaled
They shared
They cared.....
but now he was gone away
She sit....
listening
wishing
for his footsteps down the hall
to walk again
across the canvas of her heart
She couldn't help but be discouraged
To be sad, and to cry;
especially when she didn't understand
or know the reason why
So she just lays there,
while MY LADY, THE MOON
watches her
..........while she cries
jakuper(5/30/07)

your words take me on a fantastic voyage of emotions raw..So many times I feel you write me....I will never tire of this place....Hugs~Suga
ReplyDeleteXPRESSIONS...You are your name. And I thank you for your sweet comments, always
ReplyDeleteLoved this mixture of fantasy and real talk.....was a lovely ride JA
ReplyDeleteBlessings.
ReplyDeleteJoycie-pooh!!! I really liked this, sis *smile* It was so... real and relatable, y'kno? Like everyone can relate because I'm sure everyone has had a moment like that **head nod** Consider this dug, and uhm, I stole your picture *tehehe*
Peace within and God bless you, love.
Beautiful. I would like to cry on the moon's shoulders today. Loved this.
ReplyDelete"Echoes of laughter
ReplyDeleteand the good times that she had
now bounced off the mental spaces
the walls.....
that both of them
had carelessly scaled"
Loved this part the mental picture is soooooooo vividdddddddd..
Sassy....Thanks for your approval. I really liked the challenge....
ReplyDeletePoetica...Thanks for dugging this. and you're welcome to the pic, I guess. it's from the group(SP)
ReplyDeleteBuffi....Awwww, I will make you a place beside me. lol.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read....
CHulo...Almost everything I write is partly from experiences...past and present.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by! Glad you liked it...
Lawdhamercy. Mmmph. You took the words right out of my mouth. Beautifully scribed Sis. The imagery, the melancholy...I felt every bit of it.
ReplyDeleteSmiling...Ms Divine..I am truly glad that you liked this.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the read...
The was the most touching thing I've read Joyce...I REALLY FELT THAT.....
ReplyDeleteI want to put it in a book and read it each night.
and the picture really sets the mood...Love the green font to match...lol (wink)
Nanah.....I kinda liked the way it turned out, too....
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind comments, always...
anytime, anytime, you keep paying me,
ReplyDeleteand I'll keep commenting...lol --- (wink)
I hope you're doing ok...(smile)
,,,THE CHECK IS IN THE MAIL!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece.....!
ReplyDeleteThanks Hakim!
ReplyDeletewow
ReplyDeleteISP...The guy with few words, but very profound...lol
ReplyDeleteThanks