Thursday, April 5, 2007

Make Sweat...

D
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i
p
drip
dripping
lust of my lover
Spilling
onto me
into me
into the covers

Watching
her work
She takes her time
She takes my clit
into her mouth...
all of it
this time
Then she slides all of her
inside of me
as she confides in me
her desire for me
Bouncing
on top of me
Thrusting
around in me
Feels like she is bending me
.....breaking me
Her tongue
wildly pouncing
...inside of me
For hours we tangle
the dampened covers
dancing
like we are first-time lovers
It always feels like
the first time
Sliding up
and down this body of mine
back and forth
Toes turned north
then south
Passion burning us up

...long wet,
perspiring
kisses in the mouth

Those sensual sex faces
and noises we make
Energies spent..
how much more can I take
Greedy I am--
but, it's our routine
I can't get enough of it..
This is better than any dream
Waters oozing
desires
still secreting
from our tired clammy skin

But, we're both exhausted now

We rest....until it's time to begin again

Then it's my turn....






jakuper(4/5/07)


27 comments:

  1. Damn. I need a cigarette.
    ...AND I DON'T EVEN SMOKE!!!...lol

    That was good.

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  2. That made me sweat from just the read

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  3. Thanks Ms Byrdie....I made myself need a smoke...lol

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  4. Three...If I can make you sweat....Hmmmm

    Thanks!

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  5. Perfect...From one steamy writer to another....lol

    thanks for the read

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  6. Enchanting...Thanks. We used to steam the screen up...where u at, Mami...

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  7. calling the fire department because you started a fire up in here....damn

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  8. I've got the water hose because my sister has definitely set a fire with those hot words. Write it sis! Write it!

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  9. Okay...
    this is so freakin' hot...
    :D

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  10. Ms Diva....I did. I dialed 9111 it was so warm in here...lol
    thansk for the read...

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  11. Hi Velle...They made me do it! I had to describe sweat..and I...I..umm, kinda said all this..lol

    thanks for the read...

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  12. Bunny...I think you're the culprit...LOL

    I hope you saitsfied...LOL Thanks...

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  13. lmao....Joyce, now you know I know that there is a hot side to your muse. She makes those steamy words flow from your pen every once in a while.

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  14. Satisfied?
    I'd be satisfied if I was LIVING this piece...lol

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  15. whoops. Hand just slid off the mouse. Is it warm in here to you? scuse me I need a towel and a cigarette. And I don't even smoke.

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  16. Velle......
    laughing at my sister. Don't matter where you go..some things you just dont want your lil sistah to know about you...but, in this case....I'm glad I don't have to hide it....

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  17. Bunny...Now you got me blushing....LOL

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  18. Tammyyy...OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..Now Im really embarrassed!

    Im glad u liked it...

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  19. this shit is HOT Joycie..gon head gurl...let em know how it's done!

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  20. <-----comes in peeping between fingers.....Ohh...Wooo...Whoaa....leaves tip toeing out...wiping forehead......LAWDHAMMERCY.....GOT ICE?

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  21. MyssNikki....I don't know what got into me...lol

    Glad you liked it....lol

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  22. Sugga Mama...I remember .....But, It just slipped from my PEN...lol

    Thanks for trying to peep it...lol

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  23. Scared of you! Reading this with one eye open. Joycie..this was hot!

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  24. Kellllyyyyyyyyyyyy! How u doing? Thanks for the peep. I kinda liked it...lol

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  25. plz cover me to enjoy at these club, See U

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