Friday, October 13, 2006

Sp Exercise..SHADOWS OF TRANSGRESSION


 

 

So much
for that diabolical scheme
The one I devised
to make you go away
When I find my own feelings
are what's holding me back
I said I'd walk away
and save myself some tears
But your name
is always haunting me
taunting me
chanting,
whispering

ranting
facetiously

in my ears
all throughout the day....
'Why won't you let me stay?'
shadows cast
over your loving me 
Transgressions
that I cannot defend
When you're hurt
over and over
the naivety of the mind
cannot comprehend
the need
to cherish moments spent
Total negation
all that good loving
blissful days
steamy,
passionate nights
Because love is not promised
to last forever
if we don't take care of it
every day
There is no justice
in a broken heart
The scales

are unevenly tipped
Anxiety

over trivial things
makes
a weaker love
 
turn

and walk away

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

jakuper(10/13/06)
 

7 comments:

  1. no justice in a broken heart. this one is tight.

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  2. TAMMY...TY FOR COMMENTING....


    ENCHANTING...YOU KNOW I'M NOT SAD...LOL THANKS FOR FEELING ME

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  3. it is the way it is most times...... lovely in it sadness littleone...

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  4. Raven...Awww TY. It's just how I see the picture. But, I ahve felt like this once upon many times...LOL

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  5. I ENJOYED THIS BRILLIANT PIECE. there is no justice in a broken heart. anxiety over trivial things make for a weaker love..you got that right! nice Joyce, real nice..you express so well!

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  6. Sistah...Thank you so much for feeling me

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